Promise me you didn’t,
My trembling voice begged,
In denial of acceptance,
Of what he just said.
Oh yes I did, Bitch!
You silly dumb cunt,
Betraying you was fun,
Now you can never run.
Nobody loves you,
You’re a burden to your mom,
Didn’t she tell you,
she only wanted a son?
Please babe, don’t say that,
You know how much it hurts,
Haven’t I always healed you,
Even at my worse?
Shut the fuck up,
Stop crying you whore,
You’re pissing me off,
Do you want more?
Baby don’t do this,
You’re breaking my heart.
I can’t put back the pieces,
When you’ve torn me apart.
Your dad; a corpse,
Suffering in a grave,
You were his curse,
Which he failed to save.
The night is draping,
and the moon is late,
I don’t blame you,
For this my fate.
Trapped in this darkness,
As my reflection weeps,
Seducing rays,
That mirror my grief.
I took a deep breath,
and clicked open the knife,
Let me bid farewell,
To my miserable life.
Red birds flew,
From my gaping scar,
U can’t hurt me,
When I’ve gone too far.
I hum the forbidden hymn,
As my blood turned black.
I’m so sorry babe,
I’m never coming back.
Remember my face,
From the night before,
Excuse the mess,
ill make no-more.
You shall no longer cringe,
For my painful weep,
For I’m now blessed
With eternal sleep.
© chaos-xd 2016
Next —> White Feathers
Previous episodes
- Cursed Realm #21
- Throne of Thorns #20
- Alienated #19
- The Helm #18
- Violation #17
- Happy Pills #16
- The Dark Musings #15
- Cursed by The Moonlight #14
- Unknown #13
- Mrs.Matarage #12
- The Friend #11
- The Tunnels #10
- Rainbow in the Dark #9
- The Stranger #8
- The Diabolic Curse #7
- The Silent Scream #6
- Darkness; My New Friend #5
- The Longest Night #4
- The Kingdom #3
- The Storm #2
- Darkness Falls #1
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December 18, 2016 at 1:29 pm
Oops.. I had a goose bumps reading it..
Wow..
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December 18, 2016 at 1:40 pm
I’m glad you liked it ✌
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December 18, 2016 at 1:42 pm
Chilling; a harrowing tale
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December 18, 2016 at 1:48 pm
Emphasis on the Harrow! 😉 Thank you ✌
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December 18, 2016 at 1:43 pm
Damn… people like that don’t deserve to live!
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December 18, 2016 at 1:44 pm
I guess it’s always the wrong person dying! lol, thanks for your feedback vaas! ✌
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December 18, 2016 at 1:49 pm
Very true! But one thing I believe is darkness will fall on them one day… All we got to do is watch!
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December 18, 2016 at 1:51 pm
May the Gods be merciful!
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December 18, 2016 at 2:48 pm
Nice poem. Read it.
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December 18, 2016 at 2:59 pm
Thankyou rouge! appreciate the feedback! ✌
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December 18, 2016 at 5:03 pm
Wow .. this was unexpected.
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December 18, 2016 at 5:14 pm
Thank you Sobia! Appreciate the fedback! ✌💕
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December 18, 2016 at 5:37 pm
My pleasure. You write wonderfully.
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December 18, 2016 at 6:33 pm
Oh the rhymes! It was soo heartfelt!💫
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December 18, 2016 at 6:53 pm
Haha
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December 18, 2016 at 6:54 pm
Don’t we all enjoy it a bit more when it all rhymes! 😋✌
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December 18, 2016 at 7:12 pm
Yes we do😛❤
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December 19, 2016 at 5:38 pm
WoW!!! dripping with darkness……….felt like she was prepared……..like she almost wished on falling stars…….an escape……a justified guilt free escape………..maybe i am thinking too much……..forgive me if i strayed too far…..again loved this!! 🙂 🙂
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December 19, 2016 at 6:05 pm
Well i guess you got that right. Sometimes its easy to blame it on others before giving into the deepest temptations of life. I often tend to indulge in the darkness and fill my posts with it. Thank you so much for the feedback baba.
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December 20, 2016 at 7:27 am
it is always a pleasure…….it may sound strange but your darkness is an escape for me……i won’t wish that you dwell much in darkness but do spill a few drops here on WP….. 🙂 🙂
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December 20, 2016 at 9:15 am
It is for me too. When you find comfort in the shadows nothing can hurt you; Or I guess u feel safer! Stay happy! ✌ much love!
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December 20, 2016 at 12:13 pm
you are right…….safer in the shadows…..stay awesome!! 🙂 🙂
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December 19, 2016 at 5:41 pm
What a beautiful piece of art this is! The way you narrated the two viewpoints in your poem, was something magical. Great Work…
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December 19, 2016 at 6:11 pm
Got me very excited writing this piece and I loved the way it turned out to be too. Im glad u found the contrast, pleasing. Thank you for the feedback! Much appreciated✌❤
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December 19, 2016 at 6:12 pm
Pleasure is all mine….
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December 20, 2016 at 4:12 am
That guy should be hung up
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December 21, 2016 at 10:48 am
May the Gods be merciful! 😋
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December 21, 2016 at 10:41 am
Shadows inspire,nice.
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December 21, 2016 at 10:54 am
Thank you dear! ✌
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December 22, 2016 at 2:28 pm
This is amazing:)
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December 22, 2016 at 2:52 pm
Thankyou Yamuna! I’m glad you liked it! 💕
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December 23, 2016 at 3:39 pm
Some people have a gift of making darkness look so enticing and enchanting.
Beautiful. My friends get mad when I look at something dark and call it beautiful but that is what writers do, we find beauty in pain and sorrows.
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December 23, 2016 at 3:44 pm
There’s no greater excitement than one dark writer meeting another! I’m glad you see the beauty in the darkness! *highfive* 🖐
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December 26, 2016 at 4:29 pm
highfive buddy 😀 😀
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December 28, 2016 at 12:22 am
Nice post. I learn something new and challenging on websites I stumbleupon on a daily basis.
It will always be exciting to read content from other writers and use a little something from their sites.
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January 2, 2017 at 2:31 pm
Thanks I’m glad you liked it!
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January 1, 2017 at 3:58 am
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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January 2, 2017 at 2:06 pm
Thanks for the applause 😄
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January 2, 2017 at 2:23 pm
Well you miss are… How you say…. The shit. You might need to check the bottom of your shoes.
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January 13, 2017 at 7:13 pm
Oh my god!! I had goosebumps reading it!!!!
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January 13, 2017 at 8:02 pm
I had goosebumps writing it too! Haha..sometimes the most painful heartaches inspires us to write some fairly good pieces I suppose! Thanks for all the support! much love, xoxo ✌❤
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January 14, 2017 at 9:19 am
I guess so!!! Thanks to you too for being a great support and a lovely friend!!😘😘
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January 14, 2017 at 9:27 am
Thanks to you too Deeps! 😍
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January 15, 2017 at 9:17 am
Your dad; a corpse,
Suffering in a grave,
You were his curse,
Which he failed to save.
Seems like I’m gonna say the same thing that all others said “goosebumps while reading it!!!!”
You’re too good!!!
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January 15, 2017 at 9:26 am
Gave me goosebumps to put that part into writings.. it still broke my heart although I badly wanted that bit included.
Btw this is the poem I asked you about which confused you to the core..
The red writings on my “deceased” chapter are connected to the red writings here..
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January 19, 2017 at 10:07 am
Reblogged this on Let me give YOU the Moe-down and commented:
***DARK THEMES***
But well done.
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January 19, 2017 at 11:41 am
Much appreciated! xoxo ❤✌
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January 19, 2017 at 11:43 am
S’alright.
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May 1, 2017 at 2:02 pm
I can’t put back the pieces when you’ve torn me apart. How true. This is such a powerful piece of writing.
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June 18, 2017 at 8:27 am
This was just gutwrenchingly painful…. I’ve just recently started reading this series of yours and I’m mesmerized by the grittiness of the narration. I’m reading part after part and I can’t wait to get to the end to see how it pans out for your protagonist. I’m rooting for a happy ending of some sort for her, but knowing how you kill off your characters, I’m scared for her. Loved this poem and loving the series too 😊
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June 18, 2017 at 11:04 am
This was a real conversation btw.. I’m so amazed that you went back to my old posts and took the initiative to read through it.. much love darling! This series is literally my life story..
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June 18, 2017 at 11:10 am
(Jaw drops open) Really? Like really? This happened to you? RESPECT babe. I don’t know how you’ve had the strength to go though it all. I would have called it quits a long time back. Why are you not making this into a book?
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June 18, 2017 at 11:33 am
To be honest I’ve considered it a few million times.. the whole procedure gets me all nervous though..
Maybe someday!
Much love hun! Your support and motivation is like a spring punch on my face! And I love it..
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June 18, 2017 at 11:48 am
Lol! Trust you to be violent in how you express your love, and THAT I love. On a more serious not, consider it. You write amazingly well, and if you could churn this into a few thousand words longer, you could have a veritable Novella in your lap, begging to be published. Think again 😉
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June 18, 2017 at 12:03 pm
Haha..your comments are like gallons of petrol splashed towards my flaming dreams.. hugs! It’s very rare to see people lift up each other and motivate them to reach out to their dreams.. you are one of a kind Pradi! If I ever visit India.. I’d come give you a hug for this!
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June 18, 2017 at 5:08 pm
😁😁😁😁😁 you’re more than welcome to, darling 💓 💓 💓
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June 18, 2017 at 8:37 am
Ok im confused now. Is this the end of the series? Did you just kill her? 😨.
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June 18, 2017 at 11:03 am
I killed her.. the series continues.. even after her death. I think it’s 30 episodes. Lol.. and then I decided I’m never writing episodes that long ever again..
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June 18, 2017 at 11:09 am
I get why 😉 Ok. I got so confused! I was like she dies but why does the story seem to continue. Ha ha! Now that I have your clarification, I’ll keep reading. Great series though. Kept me hooked for well over an hour.
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June 18, 2017 at 11:34 am
Wow that’s the best thing I’ve heard in awhile.. you are really adding happy sprinkles to my sorrowful days! Hugs
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June 18, 2017 at 11:49 am
And more hugs to you! :*
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June 19, 2017 at 3:28 am
Oh god… Have u had those moments where u need to take a long.. Deep breath to take in something soo amazing…?
Well for me it was that moment when I read this… It’s Breathtakingly beautiful…
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