Jealousy soaked;
Scornful bitches,
Scooping down
to endless ditches.
Esteem ceased,
Now just a beast.
Craving for the
hateful feast.
Comments; lame,
Sarcastic and low,
A fake friend,
A stinking whore!
Endless chanting
of hints I hear,
which is now your prayer;
A poisonous spear.
Success and joy,
You shall watch me cherish.
While you dwell deep in your
Stinking rubbish.
© chaos–xd 2017 •
Other poems
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- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Eternity •°
- Forever•°
- Chaos
- Drowning•°
- Embraced
- Evanescent
- Masks of Death °•
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
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January 20, 2017 at 6:54 pm
Way to go! That’s a rightful slap on haters.
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January 21, 2017 at 1:08 am
Haha ..thanks gurl! Sudden pieces of writing just cross my mind when I’m pissed ! 🙈
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January 21, 2017 at 1:27 am
Well this sudden piece was uhmazin!
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January 20, 2017 at 6:55 pm
Deep and insightful!!!!
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January 21, 2017 at 1:02 am
Thankyou DeeDee!
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January 21, 2017 at 9:45 am
You’re welcome QueenD!!!! 😄
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January 20, 2017 at 6:58 pm
that should slap the faces of two faced liars… i have encountered so many but since i am civil, i gave them a kind smile… maybe they hated my patience so much that they tried to irrate me everyday! hahah
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January 21, 2017 at 1:02 am
Kindness is usually considered a weakness and of course they’ll scoop down to the lowest levels and do everything possible to irritate you!
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January 20, 2017 at 6:59 pm
From the start, till the full stop, it was full of wrath; I unexpectedly fell for it. Good work.
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January 21, 2017 at 1:01 am
Thanks a ton bud! ✌
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January 20, 2017 at 7:42 pm
YAY! Brilliant rhyme.
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January 21, 2017 at 1:00 am
Thanks heaps Yas! ✌
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January 21, 2017 at 1:00 am
Welcome
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January 20, 2017 at 8:14 pm
Boom!
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January 21, 2017 at 12:59 am
👍😊
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January 20, 2017 at 10:48 pm
Beautiful.
I Love 1st and 2nd stanza.
Haters, either stop hating or read this post. I’m damn sure, you are not gonna hate anymore. 🙈😅
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January 21, 2017 at 12:51 am
Haha thanks Dalj! Hatred could probably double up after they’ve read this! 🙈
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January 21, 2017 at 2:39 am
Hahaha😂😂…..
But who cares?
We are the lovers, all we see is Love and we enjoy it, that’s why the haters hate us. LOVE YOU HATERS 🙈😂😂
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January 21, 2017 at 9:40 am
Absolutely! XD
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January 20, 2017 at 11:05 pm
Rhymed perfectly ! Awesome work chaos!
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January 21, 2017 at 12:49 am
Thanks..lol it always rhymes better when I’m angry! 😋
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January 21, 2017 at 1:16 am
Haha yaa ik that feeling😄
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January 20, 2017 at 11:39 pm
Wow beautiful. The image is also really powerful- probably why you chose it for your profile picture.
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January 21, 2017 at 9:34 am
Yes! Was looking for an appropriate pic for this poem and nothing was satisfying enough and this pic just seemed right! Thankyou!
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January 21, 2017 at 5:37 pm
Ha ha you are very welcome 😊
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January 21, 2017 at 7:23 am
You’re amazing with words and rhymes Miss Dark Ji!
Loved this powerful post against double-faced people!!
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January 21, 2017 at 8:38 am
Thank you heaps Ash! Was missing you around the comments during your exams!
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January 21, 2017 at 8:39 am
But now I’m back!!!
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January 21, 2017 at 9:10 am
dark, powerful and profound………when you know and accept who you are…….no opinion matters……march on….conquer! 🙂 🙂
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January 21, 2017 at 9:35 am
Thank you Nov! Shall be conquering soon! ✌
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January 21, 2017 at 9:39 am
good luck!!! 🙂
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January 21, 2017 at 3:06 pm
Superlike button anywhere? We have had enough love poems ,now this is what is needed most.Thank you.
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January 21, 2017 at 3:33 pm
You made my day! Completely absolutely made my day! ❤
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January 21, 2017 at 5:34 pm
Waiting for more spice…
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January 24, 2017 at 6:35 pm
I’m really obsessed with all these images you feature, they’re so good!
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January 25, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Thankyou I actually spend more time the image selection than the writing itself ! Much appreciated! xoxo ✌
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January 26, 2017 at 1:46 pm
They really are well-chosen!
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January 24, 2017 at 8:30 pm
I could feel the celebration of rubbish and dark. Well penned! 🙂
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January 25, 2017 at 1:53 pm
Thankyou Prakash Ji! You made my day! ✌
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January 25, 2017 at 9:56 am
I never knew Rubbish could become so likeable… 😉
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January 25, 2017 at 1:49 pm
Haha..I always manage to put words together for a poem when I’m kinda pissed off! 🙈 glad you like it bud!
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March 9, 2017 at 6:00 pm
I don’t have haters. May be I didn’t care much to notice if there are any but it’s always better to stay away from them before the hatred gets inside us too. So you’re on the right track.
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March 19, 2017 at 1:21 pm
I’m consumed by hate, peacefully waiting to see them burn in hell! 😏✌
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March 19, 2017 at 2:24 pm
I hope hell never exists😀😀
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