Erase me,
A heinous mistake,
Poisoned like
A rattlesnake.
A suicidal being,
Lame and weak,
A dying facade
Of the shameful fleet.
A detached soul,
Simply not whole.
Burn the poems
Of this dying soul.
Ignore the poet,
Let the Vivid charm drown.
Gaze into my
Flaming frown.
Unworthy of love,
Unhear my cry,
For ‘forever’ is
A terrible lie.
© chaos–xd 2017 • vivid
Other poems
- Insanity •°
- Goodbye•°
- Insomniac•°
- You!
- Venom •°
- Death •°
- Caged
- Burn
- Heartless
- Silent Darkness
- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Eternity •°
- Chaos
- Drowning•°
- Embraced
- Evanescent
- Masks of Death °•
- °•Rubbish
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
- No more
March 5, 2017 at 1:31 pm
“For ‘Forever’ is
A terrible lie.”……
So true….
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March 7, 2017 at 1:07 pm
Loved that phrase didn’t you?
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March 7, 2017 at 1:08 pm
I Loooooovvvvvveeeeeedddddd it
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March 5, 2017 at 1:34 pm
Beautiful!! I love it. Great choice on the picture.
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March 7, 2017 at 1:06 pm
Thanks again kaws! 😏✌
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March 8, 2017 at 9:36 am
You’re welcome.
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March 5, 2017 at 1:40 pm
Awesome poems chaos!!
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March 5, 2017 at 1:51 pm
Thanks! ✌
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March 5, 2017 at 3:36 pm
Anytime!😊
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March 5, 2017 at 1:59 pm
The line ‘dying facade’ replaced with ‘decrepit facade’, and the word ‘ignore’ and ‘gaze’ in the fourth stanza change into ‘ignoring’ and ‘gazing’ would make this piece of art even more beautiful. The last two lines are outstanding as ever, near impeccability. Keep it up!
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March 5, 2017 at 2:10 pm
Thanks Bryan!
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March 5, 2017 at 2:34 pm
Just one word fabulous😆😆😆😆
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March 7, 2017 at 12:58 pm
Awesome! Thanks for making my day! 😊
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March 7, 2017 at 2:55 pm
Well believe me its your post that makes my day _😊😀😀😊
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March 5, 2017 at 2:42 pm
Soooooo talented! Welldone.
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March 7, 2017 at 12:57 pm
Thanks a million Nathan! 😏✌
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March 5, 2017 at 2:44 pm
I am gazing…..and feeling at home!!!! ☺️
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March 7, 2017 at 12:56 pm
I’m honored! ✌
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March 7, 2017 at 1:38 pm
My pleasure entirely 🙂
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March 5, 2017 at 3:09 pm
Please follow me 😊
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March 5, 2017 at 3:33 pm
That was depressing. So great job!!! 🙂
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March 7, 2017 at 12:56 pm
Much love Dom! 🙄✌
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March 5, 2017 at 4:10 pm
Great writing! Love your depth 😊😊
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March 7, 2017 at 12:56 pm
Thank you to the moon and back! 😘
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March 5, 2017 at 6:23 pm
You leave me, short of words to praise you girl…. I am addicted to read your writings now!!!
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March 7, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Much love DeeDee! Blogging would never have meant anything to me without all of you! 😘
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March 5, 2017 at 7:20 pm
I Loved the last 2 lines.. For forever is a Terrible lie. You are correct.. Forever is nothing.. Forever is till the other person gets bored of you… Awesome poem!!
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March 7, 2017 at 12:51 pm
“Forever is till the other person gets bored of you” Damn that phrase was on point and stabbed my deepest emotion core in existence!
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March 7, 2017 at 1:01 pm
I know that feeling because I too have been a prey of it.. People leave you high and dry and pretend like nothing happened….
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March 7, 2017 at 1:24 pm
And then you never stop feeling that sinking drowning feeling!
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March 7, 2017 at 1:27 pm
That’s true.. We always tend to drown more and more in this never ending sea… Hate this feeling but still have to live with it..
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March 5, 2017 at 8:05 pm
Burn the poems of this dying soul, for forever is a terrible lie. My heart is heavy reading this poem. Tc moon
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March 7, 2017 at 12:50 pm
Much love, sunshine!
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March 6, 2017 at 2:56 pm
For ‘forever’ is
A terrible lie.
This is a beautiful line, yet the sad truth
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March 7, 2017 at 12:40 pm
It definitely is! 😏✌ Thanks!
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March 7, 2017 at 5:41 pm
“Gaze into my flaming frown!” Definitely speaks volumes about the depth of your feelings, this line is so intense and powerful, Choas, that it gave me an instant high! ❤ love it, totally❤
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March 11, 2017 at 4:59 pm
Much love twink! I’m glad you’re enjoying the posts and it definitely brightens up my days to see your feedback! xoxo ✌
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March 11, 2017 at 6:07 pm
Same here girl. Xoxo
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March 8, 2017 at 3:46 am
Untied all my knots
Save for one dear blood clot
For picking on you
Is my only lot
We were left to rot
Trapped in this tedious plot
For blood and woe
Is all we begot
We, the shamfeul blot,
Mistakes they forgot..
But to forgetting you
They’ll shame me not..
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March 11, 2017 at 5:00 pm
Thank you! I don’t know how you come up with writings so beautiful! xoxo ❤
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March 8, 2017 at 5:18 pm
Hey, great post. I would like to inform you that I am changing my blog link to blogtastic416. Please use this link from now on…..www.blogtastic416.wordpress.com
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March 11, 2017 at 5:02 pm
Noted! 👍
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March 12, 2017 at 1:33 am
Thanks!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:13 pm
I have never been able to relate to any thing but this!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:53 pm
Ouch…that’s lovely and painful at the same time! -hugs-
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March 11, 2017 at 3:54 pm
It is! *hugs you back* 😊
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March 11, 2017 at 5:42 pm
It was pulchritudinous…
It was smooth. ..
I didn’t break my breath while reading it…
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March 11, 2017 at 5:58 pm
Much appreciated Junaid! You’ve made my day! ✌😏
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March 11, 2017 at 6:01 pm
Pleasure is mine….
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Hope we all keep getting better with every passing moment…
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March 19, 2017 at 7:10 am
Awesome! I is just great!
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March 19, 2017 at 11:00 am
Thanks you Roy! ✌
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March 21, 2017 at 5:20 pm
a lie,
your lie,
i have to pay
in tears for
pass the vial
raise me
erase me, amour.
i seem to have lost my poetry kit somewhere………loved this!!!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Loved your comment! Much wow! Thank you! ✌
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April 2, 2017 at 6:29 am
it was rubbish…..you are kind…..thank you!!! 🙂 🙂
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April 2, 2017 at 6:55 am
You’re welcome welcome! ✌
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April 2, 2017 at 6:55 am
😀 😀
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April 1, 2017 at 9:52 am
The last lines of your poems literally can stab someone!!!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:07 pm
They stab me when I write them too! #flatteredmuch 😏✌
Thank you sunshine!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:12 pm
I hope it wasn’t (OVER Flattering) because whatever I said wasn’t exaggerated, trust me!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:33 pm
It was phur-fekt! 😍
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April 1, 2017 at 2:36 pm
haha, I am glad! Just in a few minutes, I’m gonna mail you the poem
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April 1, 2017 at 2:44 pm
sent you a mail, received?
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April 1, 2017 at 2:50 pm
Gonna check right away! 😘✌
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April 9, 2017 at 8:13 am
Can you see me standing in the corner, applauding? 😭
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April 9, 2017 at 8:16 am
I can, Oh.. I can! 😭
Thank you darling!
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April 9, 2017 at 8:26 am
Anything for you. 😭😘
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April 17, 2017 at 7:57 pm
Raw, poignant and profound.
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April 18, 2017 at 7:16 am
Those adjectives made my heart leapt in joy! 😄
Thank you George! ✌
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June 10, 2017 at 10:38 am
Can you write one good positive poem…other than these Dark things…you have explored enough darkeness ..
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June 10, 2017 at 10:42 am
I write what I want
You read what you see
if you like what I write,
you follow,
and if you don’t,
u unfolllow!
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June 10, 2017 at 10:44 am
Oh my god..are you serious?? Sorry for that..I just asked jovially…I have no right to demand or order..I am just asking..sorry if that made you angry..whatever you write I will read…no one has right ..I just want to read when you write something different..soo I asked you..if that gutted you..I am extremely sorry
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June 10, 2017 at 10:51 am
I’m sorry if that reply was too harsh.. happiness never provokes my writing! But I shall remember you if I ever write something happy!
😏✌ peace!
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June 10, 2017 at 10:52 am
I don’t know whether it’s harsh or not..but I am afraid that you got hurt ,soo I said sorry..I don’t want anyone to get hurt because of me..
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June 10, 2017 at 10:54 am
It’s fine! I don’t get hurt that easily…very nice of you! Have a great day!
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June 10, 2017 at 10:55 am
Hmmm….can I know which place or you from?? ( please don’t say dark cave)
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