Bloodstained tears,
Paint my cheeks,
I choke in the darkness
Afraid to speak.
Oh, don’t, don’t stab me,
Bring this pain to a halt.
Loving you so deep
Was my only fault.
They tell me so gently,
As they dry my eyes.
“I have to let go,”
“I’m too precious to cry.”
Here are my teardrops,
Collect them like rain,
Dissolve me..
In an eternity of pain.
© chaos–xd 2017 •
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- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Forever•°
- Chaos
- Drowning•°
- Embraced
- Evanescent
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- °•Rubbish
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
- No more
March 6, 2017 at 8:50 pm
This is touching. I remember when someone I truly loved hurt me immensely and I cried forever. Everyone said to let go because I deserved better but I loved that person so…I got over them later and moved on though.
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March 7, 2017 at 12:38 pm
Absolutely! I’ve been there gurl .. thanks for the comment! ✌
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March 6, 2017 at 8:57 pm
Beautiful piece, never minding the light gory details. 🙂
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March 7, 2017 at 12:37 pm
Thank you heaps insomnia bud! 😎✌
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March 7, 2017 at 12:39 pm
Pleasure! 🙂
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March 6, 2017 at 10:08 pm
i am always moved by the intensity your words bring to me
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March 7, 2017 at 12:36 pm
And I’m always blessed to have readers like you! xoxo 💟
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March 7, 2017 at 12:32 am
Dun let pain and sadness over come your mind!
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March 7, 2017 at 1:40 am
That’s like saying.. “Don’t let the fish get wet”
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March 7, 2017 at 8:38 am
Ya but too much of it is dangerous… like “a tsunami can even kill a fish”
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March 7, 2017 at 12:07 pm
Lol! Can it? By drowning it i suppose 😄
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March 7, 2017 at 12:10 pm
Lol yaa!
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March 7, 2017 at 12:49 am
Deep
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March 7, 2017 at 1:39 am
Rolling in the deep! 😏✌ Thanks
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March 7, 2017 at 2:35 am
Exactly 😀
Your welcome
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March 7, 2017 at 4:28 am
deepdeepdeep!!!! beautiful piece sis!💞And to your lovely times IMBACK😎😎😎😇😇😇😍😍😍😍❤❤💕💕😘😘😘😘hope to get you soon to the read and blog relationship.. hehe✌hope you are doing great!
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March 7, 2017 at 12:35 pm
I’ve missed you greatly shiv! Brightens my day to finally see you back! Thank you heaps! 😘
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March 7, 2017 at 1:08 pm
😇😇😇what a charm did the comment have💞😍thank you dear, and now on you shall have bright days only and i m happier to be in the league😇💞💕
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March 7, 2017 at 9:19 am
Loving someone beyond limits always brings unbearable pain ….
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March 7, 2017 at 12:34 pm
That’s why it’s a curse to love too deep! 😏✌
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March 7, 2017 at 9:47 am
Beautiful!
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March 7, 2017 at 12:03 pm
Thanks ✌
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March 8, 2017 at 9:36 am
You’re welcome.
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March 7, 2017 at 4:03 pm
I truly have no words!
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March 7, 2017 at 4:10 pm
That’s nice to hear! Thanks ✌
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March 7, 2017 at 5:21 pm
Painful to bear the hurt, especially for someone whom you love so much. It’s always wise to love moderately, so the pain is bearable if it ever comes to departing ways.
You wrote it wonderfully.
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March 7, 2017 at 5:27 pm
Absolutely! What hurts the most is coming to know that all that love we once held pure was of no value whatsoever!
Loving moderately is something I miserably fail at doing.. its either over the moon or not in existence!
Thank you so much for your comment! xoxo
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March 8, 2017 at 7:10 am
Yes I can imagine, I think we all fail at that sometimes thinking nothing will go wrong till life takes a turn.
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March 7, 2017 at 6:55 pm
Here are my tear drops ,collect them like rain..hear my stabbing words, you’ll die in pain.aww..darkness creeping in me too
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March 8, 2017 at 1:00 am
A little rhymes species it all up! 😘✌
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March 8, 2017 at 5:14 pm
Happy women’s day dear
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March 9, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Wish you the same hun!
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March 8, 2017 at 5:48 pm
Wow, this is amazing!
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March 9, 2017 at 5:51 pm
Thanks gurl 😘✌
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March 9, 2017 at 4:20 am
Deep emotions beautifully expressed! 💟
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March 9, 2017 at 5:49 pm
Aw! Thanks gurl! 😘✌
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March 10, 2017 at 6:48 am
You’re always welcome!! ☺️
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March 9, 2017 at 12:59 pm
Beautiful..💚..everything in the poem was perfect..🙂
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March 9, 2017 at 5:49 pm
I’m honored! 😊✌
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March 11, 2017 at 2:17 am
Ahh, idk what to say anymore. Marvellous👌
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March 11, 2017 at 4:04 pm
Thanks Ash! ✌
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March 11, 2017 at 4:05 pm
You’re welcome 🙂
And though late, I’ve posted the new part of Occult of Strigoikirk!
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March 11, 2017 at 4:06 pm
Gotta smack ya before reading it! 👊💥
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March 11, 2017 at 4:27 pm
bwahaha, gotta find a helmet
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March 11, 2017 at 4:34 am
Eternity is a long time babes..time enough for new scars to replace the old ones and fresh warm tears to wet ur cheeks which bear no marks of the rains that washed them once..you can’t fight pain you can make friends with it.
If forever must never come
If this pain is my life’s sum
To its relentless knife
Let me succumb..
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March 11, 2017 at 4:30 pm
New scars to replace the old?
Fresh tears to wet my cheeks which bear no marks?
The rains washed them once?
Make friends with the pain?
every phase .. Every word so rich.. soo very rich, that each of them seem like a piece of individual art!
I take so long to reply to your comments cause the richness needs time to settle!
Your writings are as phenomenal as you are! 👌😘
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April 1, 2017 at 9:57 am
Now here I am left,
with love and shame,
wish I would’ve known,
your love was just a game.
(I can write poems, too) *cries silently with tears in his eyes*
OH MY GOD!!!!! I have never had a heartbreak but your poems make me feel sad about things that haven’t even happened to me. I mean, I cry over my heart breaking, even when there’s no one to do it! That’s the magic of your words, I guess!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:05 pm
Wow that rhyme was epic! You should write more poems Harsh! I’m honored that this poem had an impact on your little heart! Although I hate seeing you sad.. I love it when my writings touch your heart! 😘
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April 9, 2017 at 8:10 am
The rhyming is perfect. 😍
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April 9, 2017 at 8:15 am
I love making stuff rhyme.. a poem almost looks like an utter failure to me if it doesn’t rhyme! Thanks babe! 😍✌
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