Sometimes when people say forever, they mean it; and sometimes they don’t.
“I will love you for an eternity and beyond”
His words echoed in her head like African drums beating at a grand ceremony. As she crouched back into the corner of the creaky old bed she clutched to the only thing that now belonged to her; her crayon. His name, now formed Patterns on the dirty asylum walls.
© chaos-xd 2017
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A Glimpse of Darkness 
March 11, 2017 at 1:40 pm
Great post!! I posted about this daily prompt rn too! Check it out 🙂
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March 11, 2017 at 1:46 pm
Thanks!
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March 11, 2017 at 1:42 pm
Damnn! Your posts are starting to feel so deep these days!
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March 11, 2017 at 1:47 pm
These days? 😏
They’ve always been deep Vaas!
xoxo!
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March 11, 2017 at 1:48 pm
Yea I guess so!😊
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March 11, 2017 at 2:01 pm
you’ve inspired a thought, that when we make contact, we become connected. It requires effort on both ends to maintain the strength of that bond. Beautiful prose. I’m glad I’ve encountered you.
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March 11, 2017 at 4:00 pm
Absolutely, & when the balance of the bond is lost.. everything else is lost with it! Thank you so much!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:07 pm
Oh this time it’s asylum. What more is left? I know You will surprise me again with something new. I will love your poems for eternity and beyond.moon looks lovely tonight😊
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March 11, 2017 at 3:59 pm
Surprises are yet to come based on the daily prompts! I love your support too JenJen! xoxo ✌ ❤
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March 11, 2017 at 3:12 pm
The picture is very intriguing and suiting for your wonderful writing, keep it up, chaos!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Thank you Bryan! It’s always an honour to have your comments on my posts!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:55 pm
It is my pleasure.
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March 11, 2017 at 3:37 pm
Aah….but you do need an ear which understands when words like that said, mean what is said 🙂
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March 11, 2017 at 3:40 pm
Of course, but when the smokey mists of love cloud our reality we often fail to have an ear to the ground, don’t we?
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March 11, 2017 at 3:42 pm
Oh that is very true 🙂
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March 11, 2017 at 3:41 pm
Promises turn out to be fake at times…But still we yearn for it.
But I am in love with daily prompts,one word with multiple thoughts..Lovely isn’t?
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March 11, 2017 at 3:51 pm
Absolutely fascinating to see the variety of posts prompted by that single word.. yes!
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March 11, 2017 at 3:53 pm
Glad to get your reply…these days you look vanished..
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March 11, 2017 at 3:59 pm
Some people give eternal Love and others, eternal pain….
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March 11, 2017 at 4:12 pm
Absolutely.
Worded in style! 👌
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March 11, 2017 at 4:14 pm
Thank-you 😊💕✌…
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March 11, 2017 at 4:33 pm
Why does love give pain????
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March 11, 2017 at 4:38 pm
Cause It was created with a pinch of poison and sprinkles of the cursed.
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March 11, 2017 at 4:34 pm
Wow!! That’s deep.
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March 11, 2017 at 4:41 pm
Thanks gurl! ✌💥
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March 11, 2017 at 6:23 pm
I nominated you for the blogger recognition award https://poetry2473.wordpress.com/2017/03/11/blogger-recognition-award/
I’d love for you to participate but it’s entirely your choice.
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March 12, 2017 at 6:13 pm
Sure will!! Thanks a ton! 😊👍
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March 12, 2017 at 7:06 pm
You are very welcome and very well deserved
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March 11, 2017 at 7:02 pm
Exceptional and excellent!!
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March 12, 2017 at 6:14 pm
Thanks hun! 😊
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March 13, 2017 at 2:22 am
And I wanted to tell you that my story series is over!! You’re welcome to take a look
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March 11, 2017 at 9:09 pm
i got the feeling after reading this that some people just don’t hold on to the dream we share with them long enough or strong enough and let it go before we do, her crayon will colour the greyness in the walls she builds in her heart – love your words as always.
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March 12, 2017 at 6:17 pm
That’s a very deep and lovely interpretation! Some let go before we do.. of course! Thank you so much! Your honest and dedicated feedback brightens up my days !!
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March 12, 2017 at 8:12 pm
reading your words is the pleasure
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March 11, 2017 at 9:50 pm
Well written, sweet
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March 12, 2017 at 6:11 pm
Much appreciated Leah! 😊👍
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March 11, 2017 at 10:23 pm
Nice!😎👍
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March 12, 2017 at 6:11 pm
Thanks Mr.Bland! 👍
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March 11, 2017 at 11:12 pm
I love this especially the picture!!
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March 12, 2017 at 6:10 pm
Thank you Kaws! Love it when people notice the picture cause I spend of lot of time chosing the one I feel suits best! xoxo ✌😄
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March 13, 2017 at 10:38 am
You’re welcome. It suits this piece very well. I’m glad you chose it.
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March 12, 2017 at 8:30 am
“Sometimes when people say forever, they mean it; and sometimes they don’t.” Oooh such insight you provide! And I love the picture. So rich.
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March 12, 2017 at 6:08 pm
It’s excites me more when people notice the picture than the post sometimes! Much love, ahavaha! xoxo
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March 12, 2017 at 6:19 pm
Light&love. Yes! The photo stands out.
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March 13, 2017 at 7:33 am
Splendid👌
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March 16, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Thanks rhyme bud 👍
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March 13, 2017 at 1:00 pm
I’m shook, this is amazing!
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March 16, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Thanks gurl! ✌
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March 23, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Hey! I’ve tagged you in my Blue Sky Tag post! Here’s the link: https://clusterofstarsblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/16/blue-sky-tag-1/ 🙂
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March 13, 2017 at 8:55 pm
Hi hi…you probably get this a lot but ..I have nominated you for the Bloggers Recognition Award. Thanks for being the first few bloggers to interact with me here…Here is the link – https://phayteaspulse.wordpress.com/2017/03/13/blogger-recognition-award/
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March 16, 2017 at 12:56 pm
Much appreciated hun+ 👍
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March 14, 2017 at 4:36 pm
There was a time I believed in forever.But now I have realized, forever is too good to be real.
We all should just keep one thing in our mind- Nothing Lasts Forever.
That’s the easiest lesson we all learn the hardest way.
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March 16, 2017 at 12:56 pm
Absolutely! Abso-freaking-lutely!!
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March 17, 2017 at 8:26 am
Awsm post
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March 17, 2017 at 12:29 pm
Thanks! 👌
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March 17, 2017 at 9:43 am
Thanks for the follow. Prompted me to wander over here to discover you. Love your blog!
This powerfully succinct and dark flash fiction (I hope) created a lasting and vivid impression.
Looking forward to seeing what’s coming next
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March 17, 2017 at 12:28 pm
You’ve just made my weekend better Gabe! Honest comments like yours spice up my days!! Thank you! ✌
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March 17, 2017 at 3:01 pm
Wow, you are deep. I am loving this, the whole thing
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March 17, 2017 at 3:38 pm
Much appreciated Tom! Thank you heaps! xoxo ✌
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March 17, 2017 at 3:39 pm
Ps:- my comment on your post seems to have gotten caught in your spam folder. Please rescue it! 😭✌
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March 21, 2017 at 5:10 pm
WoW!!! short powerful and effective……..great narration! 🙂 🙂
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April 1, 2017 at 1:48 pm
Thanks buddy! 😘✌
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April 2, 2017 at 6:26 am
most welcome!!! 🙂 🙂
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March 29, 2017 at 7:41 am
This is epic! 🙂
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April 1, 2017 at 8:23 am
Thanks babe! 😊✌
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April 1, 2017 at 8:36 am
You are welcome darling. 🙂
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April 1, 2017 at 10:11 am
Aaah, this is so hurtful, yet so amazing!!! I just can’t picture someone like that, let alone actually seeing someone like this! This was so painful!
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April 1, 2017 at 1:42 pm
Your comments make my blog feel alive again Harsh! Thank you!
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April 1, 2017 at 1:59 pm
No need for the thank you, Miss Dark Ji! I am so happy to be back!
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April 9, 2017 at 8:09 am
Wow. This is so similar to my “Madness”
I love your version better! 😍🔥
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April 9, 2017 at 8:20 am
Omg yes! I just went back and checked.. i remember it was one piece of writing that blew my mind.. and all that similarly on point! Highfive! 🖐
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April 9, 2017 at 8:28 am
Haha yes! But, I love yours better.
High five, Cutie!
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April 11, 2017 at 11:03 am
Beautiful..but sad
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April 11, 2017 at 11:04 am
Thankyou heaps! ✌
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April 14, 2017 at 2:54 pm
Sometimes when he says ‘forever ‘
we know
Sometimes we don’t
Inspiring
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April 14, 2017 at 4:51 pm
Absolutely! Thank you so much!
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