Somewhere beneath the galloping waves, arrogance permeated the skies with unforgiving screams. Warmth wept in turmoil as droplets of melancholy descended in a drizzle. Love subsided into mere insignificance.
© chaos-xd 2017
Other mini tales
Somewhere beneath the galloping waves, arrogance permeated the skies with unforgiving screams. Warmth wept in turmoil as droplets of melancholy descended in a drizzle. Love subsided into mere insignificance.
© chaos-xd 2017
Other mini tales
A Glimpse of Darkness 
April 8, 2017 at 6:41 pm
Only if you let it.
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April 9, 2017 at 3:53 pm
Abso-freaking-lutely! Ive let it rain down completely..
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April 8, 2017 at 7:07 pm
so you’ve started something different? aha
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April 9, 2017 at 3:55 pm
What’s different?
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April 8, 2017 at 7:09 pm
Very descriptive visuals and emotion. For some reason, even though I know I should feel the opposite, I totally want to be in that place.
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April 10, 2017 at 10:00 am
This comment is extraordinarily heart warming! Thank you Matrix buddy! ✌
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April 10, 2017 at 12:12 pm
You got it! 😎
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April 8, 2017 at 7:24 pm
Oh wow that was wonderful. Anddd could you review my latest story? Wrote a flash fiction after a loooong time!
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April 10, 2017 at 9:59 am
Will do definitely! I need to make sometime .. I’ve loads of your stuff pending to read!
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April 10, 2017 at 10:33 am
Ahaha sure! Whenever you please ^-^
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April 8, 2017 at 8:08 pm
Truly quite aesthetically vivid!!
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April 10, 2017 at 9:58 am
Much appreciated sweetheart! ✌😘
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April 8, 2017 at 8:24 pm
I believe I have taken this kind of fall…
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April 10, 2017 at 9:56 am
I hope it didn’t leave you bruised.
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April 10, 2017 at 11:25 am
Bruises heal 😉 ❤
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April 10, 2017 at 11:26 am
Thankfully! 😏👍
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April 8, 2017 at 8:40 pm
very powerful. beautiful imagery
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April 10, 2017 at 9:08 am
Thanks love! 😏✌
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April 8, 2017 at 9:45 pm
amazing words cutting deep
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April 10, 2017 at 9:07 am
Thankyou sunshine.. loving your new profile pic! 😘✌
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April 10, 2017 at 12:30 pm
thank you! and you noticed! you are the first to say so and that makes me so happy!
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April 8, 2017 at 11:26 pm
Oh.. Powerful words. Love it ! ,even if its a bit ..dark? Haha nice..
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April 9, 2017 at 4:07 pm
My writings are never bright my friend! Thank you! ✌😏
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April 9, 2017 at 7:25 pm
Yes. Your name says it all, “glimpse of darkness” hehe
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April 9, 2017 at 12:06 am
So much thoughts in it…
Never let depression overcome yourself!
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April 10, 2017 at 9:56 am
Thanks! 😄 I’m glad you understood it yo! ✌
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April 10, 2017 at 9:57 am
Yea😋😂 your welcome!😄😉
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April 9, 2017 at 2:37 am
Wow, this had so much power while I read it! Great job
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April 10, 2017 at 9:55 am
Thankyou heaps babe! 😍✌
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April 9, 2017 at 3:09 am
Sea could bear the darkness of the overhanging skies,
beneath her vastness, silence the earth’s mournful sighs..
Be def to curses doleful sailors cry
We blame her for putting leagues between the lands
Then row thru forgetting
She never makes demands
To corners of earth her patience expands
When storm rages she takes undue scold
Hold the travelers safe in her fold
When the winds have receded her deeds are untold..
She is not loved for the cool breezes she brings
She is forgotten, though she brought new beginnings
She just smiles thru whatever that may sting
When skies crush you down be like the seas
Find warmth in insignificant little things
When sighs are your only crown
Let not your heart freeze
Be like the seas my sweetling..
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April 11, 2017 at 11:40 am
When skies crush me down
And drown me beneath the waves..
You are my warmth,
the light inside my caves!
Your love is my crown
and the spark
that turns my frown
upside down! ;*
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April 30, 2017 at 6:08 am
Ur always queen
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April 9, 2017 at 7:41 am
Amazing description. 🙂
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April 9, 2017 at 3:44 pm
Thankyou sheetal 😙✌
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April 9, 2017 at 3:54 pm
You are welcome. 😊
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April 9, 2017 at 7:45 am
Vocabulary on point. 💕
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April 9, 2017 at 8:25 am
Thank you sunshine! 😘👍
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April 9, 2017 at 12:19 pm
Painfully good!
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April 9, 2017 at 3:02 pm
Thank you Dominic Seksi 😏✌
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April 9, 2017 at 3:16 pm
Hahaha you’re welcome 😀
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April 9, 2017 at 1:57 pm
Beautiful!
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April 9, 2017 at 2:58 pm
Thank you babe!
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April 10, 2017 at 1:29 pm
You’re welcome.
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April 9, 2017 at 4:12 pm
Deeply thoughtful and such lovely imagery.
Dear, all your posts simply compliment your title ‘A glimpse of darkness.’
Keep writing, have a lovely day.
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April 10, 2017 at 1:35 am
Wow thanks Moushmi! You’ve definitely made my day gurl..
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April 14, 2017 at 2:14 pm
It feels good to hear that I could do something to please someone.
Much love.
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April 9, 2017 at 4:35 pm
Wow bruh ! there were a looooot of words up there than i need to look’em up in the dictionary!!! ….Jk, just kidding !!!
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April 10, 2017 at 1:35 am
Haha I know dem feels bruh! 🙈
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April 9, 2017 at 5:41 pm
Love subsided into mere insignificance..this is such a powerful piece..I loved the picture moon. Vaalthukal👍👌
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April 10, 2017 at 1:34 am
Romba romba nandri nanba! 😏✌
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May 19, 2017 at 4:35 pm
I will stop reading your posts and won’t be commenting anymore as you only give likes for my comments and stay quiet..I’m gonna do the same..just telling you I’m angry on you..take care..bye
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May 19, 2017 at 4:37 pm
I didn’t understand what you are asking me yes and no for!
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May 19, 2017 at 4:41 pm
But you didn’t reply to comments on harsh blog
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May 19, 2017 at 4:43 pm
100 rupees and u don’t want hugs? What can I reply to that?
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May 19, 2017 at 4:43 pm
Bcos you didn’t reply for my previous comment
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May 19, 2017 at 4:45 pm
I honestly don’t understand what you’re upset about and if me not replying to a comment upsets you this much.. you’re better off without me! I don’t want to be the reason behind someone’s broken heart!
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May 19, 2017 at 4:51 pm
Not comments..just one comment on harsh blog which he replied and you didn’t..anyway I’m not fighting with you. I’m sorry.
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May 19, 2017 at 4:42 pm
Why am I still talking..bye
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April 10, 2017 at 1:43 pm
Woah. Woah. Woah.
You have used some deep and catchy phrase here!!
Awesomeness😍👌
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April 10, 2017 at 4:35 pm
This gives me a dark and lovely vibe ♥
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April 10, 2017 at 4:38 pm
Its great to see your comment
| a s h | thank you! ✌
Ps :- love your name!
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April 10, 2017 at 5:58 pm
Oh….right in the feels girl. Well done, hit home lately.
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April 10, 2017 at 6:16 pm
Haha thanks cupcake! ✌😘
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April 10, 2017 at 7:33 pm
Just beautiful!
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April 11, 2017 at 5:47 am
Thank you heaps gurl! ✌
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April 10, 2017 at 8:34 pm
Well goodness, gracious. That is beautifully expressed, but rather dark in effect.
Kindness – Robert.
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April 11, 2017 at 5:44 am
You make my dark heart leap in joy! Much love Robert! Thank you heaps! ✌ 😙
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April 11, 2017 at 2:48 pm
Peace ‘n’ lipstick to you too, chick. 😉
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April 11, 2017 at 3:42 am
Words cut deep. And I think I am in shreds (Don’t worry, not literally 😉) You always link the words so beautifully and craft a wonderful piece. But remember one thing, everything that makes us feel miserable, couldn’t be stronger than us. Love your style, by the way. (I think you know that already 😘)
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April 11, 2017 at 5:13 am
Haha I was missing your comment sakshi ..and here you are, once again shining your unique light upon my blog! U made me laugh when u were like.. “I’m in shreds but not literally” 😄
Got me imagining someone reading this post and falling into shreds and being like. . “Oh shit” 😐
hahaha.. Thanks for making my day! 😙✌
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April 11, 2017 at 5:25 am
You’re welcome honey! LOL 😂 Now that I really tried to imagine it with that “Oh shit” effect, it is hilarious 😄
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April 11, 2017 at 1:41 pm
whether you love light or darkness,one thing is sure god has gifted you with exceptional talent in writing 🙂
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April 11, 2017 at 2:06 pm
You, Sherin. ..have made my day soo much better! Thank you heaps and bounds for this comment! Much love! xoxo ✌
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April 11, 2017 at 2:09 pm
I am only an average writer as you know 🙂
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April 11, 2017 at 2:56 pm
can i know your name?if it is ok to tell 🙂
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April 11, 2017 at 3:01 pm
I keep that information hidden from the blog! 🙈
I’m evil bro!
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April 11, 2017 at 3:07 pm
Sister,when i write in english it is ok,but when i speak i struggle a bit?Any tip from your side?
Today i had an interview but i was finding it hard to find correct english words to speak.i
watch english movies with english subtitle,that is it 🙂
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April 11, 2017 at 3:16 pm
Well as far as I’ve taken new languages into consideration I think the keys are never giving up and curiosity!
Never feel ashamed to speak even if you make mistakes and eventually you’ll get the hang of it..
Stay in touch with a fluent friend and keep clearing your doubts on how to say new things in complex ways!
Ps:- if you piss your friend off.
Find a new friend! ✌
If you have more non blog related content to talk about please email me at simplesiteblogs@gmail.com
Peace! ✌
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April 11, 2017 at 3:18 pm
Thank you 🙂
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April 12, 2017 at 12:39 am
Hi there, I love the simplicity of your post yet there is great depth within them.. I definitely enjoy seeing them..
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April 12, 2017 at 5:31 am
Thank you heaps and bounds pretty girl.. your comment is much appreciated! ✌
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April 12, 2017 at 2:18 am
As usual beautifully (or painfully ) true post.. 👍👍
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April 12, 2017 at 5:30 am
Thank you nemo! Just keep swimming! ✌
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April 12, 2017 at 5:48 am
😀😀😀 You are welcome..
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