(21/04/2017)
Dear Diary,
The greeting aroma of newly baked pumpkin pies and roasted chicken seeped through my dark blue curtains, dragging me out of bed. My ugly Superman clock pointed at half past eleven. It sure was time to wake up, and definitely hightime I got myself a new clock.
Fatass Sam and Junky Joe often roasted me whenever they came over. “Riley the suckerman” was what I was often called. My parents were drunk for sure when they named me. Who on earth would name their son Riley, ffs!
A yawn and a stretch is all it took me to shake off the drowsiness that clutched onto me from the video games that went on till after midnight. The pile of undone laundry sat beside my school bag, in isolation as I stepped out of bed and there was Tippy my sister’s piece of shit pomeranian, nibbling on my favorite boots!
“Get out you freaking bastard.. this dumb dog.. always ruins my shit”
The halloween junior baseball bat, wrapped in fake barb wire stood against my bed. Snatching it with all my rage I flung it right at the dog!
Bullseye!
The spikes tore through the white furry coat splattering a few droplets of blood, setting it on a run for its worthless life.
Well now my carpet’s ruined but that’d teach that piece of shit not to mess with my stuff.
It was my parent’s 14th Anniversary and celebration had already begun. The excited high pitched voices from downstairs and the screeching sound of my little sister’s laughter not too different from her dumb dog, deafened my Friday morning and I knew, from the way I felt, that today was going to be another bad day!
To be continued...
© chaos–xd 2017 • Spike
April 21, 2017 at 3:52 pm
This is unique and something different from what you write usually. It’s awesome! I’m thrilled to know, how does Riley’s day go..😊😊 And it sucks to get up in the morning..😄
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April 21, 2017 at 4:18 pm
Yes babe.. attempting on draining out the hateful gore in my writings.. not too sure if I want it back so I’ve beoken the story into 4 to give myself time to decide! 🙈
Much love lazy bunny! xoxo 😙 ✌
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April 21, 2017 at 4:28 pm
Whatever your decision be.. I know the story and the ending will be fabulous and outstanding!!! Bless you!! ❤❤
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April 22, 2017 at 7:12 am
I really hope u like it though! 🙈
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April 22, 2017 at 7:13 am
Koi shak? 😏
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April 22, 2017 at 7:41 am
thoda sa shak 🙈
lekin it’s ok
ham dhek lenge!
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April 22, 2017 at 8:06 am
Hahahaha… Hum bhi dekh lenge!!! 😂
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April 22, 2017 at 8:08 am
I said that wrong? 🙈🙈🙈
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April 22, 2017 at 8:12 am
No… You didn’t… You said it right girl…😃😄 I replied to it…😄
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April 21, 2017 at 4:05 pm
Of course, I am hooked now!😎 But I am angry at Riley for what he did to poor dog 😣
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April 21, 2017 at 4:14 pm
Haha.. Riley is pretty messed up! 😏 Tippy is going fine though! Don’t worry.. ✌
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April 21, 2017 at 5:14 pm
Hehe…Thank God😌
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April 21, 2017 at 4:22 pm
I’ve read it 3 times and it gets better and more clutching with each read I gotta say..think what got me so gripped is the grumpy atmosphere your writing style has created. I’ve always loved sulky tone In what I read hehe ..can’t wait to read the next part and already aching to see character development 🙂
Post the next one soon hun.
I would love to learn more about this character and hope you will go deeper into his mind sort of..:)
Many people hide their bitterness behind a mask in order to get along but inside they are irritated at Many things..may they be the inherent mysteries in life or the mundane shit they have to pull thru not knowing exactly what for..:)
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April 22, 2017 at 8:12 am
Have I ever told you how hard it is to reply to your comments cause it makes my heart go numb is excitement?
you have a whole fanbase just cause your comments are so heartwarming!!!! 💖
I know why you can connect to Rileys grumpiness! 😙🙈
Will post the next part this evening!
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April 22, 2017 at 11:52 am
You have told me 🙂 but the posts you make are usually so awe inspiring that I end up getting my mind blown to pieces and in the process of putting the pieces back I tend to analyze what I’ve read and i come up with these replies ..I at times worry that I post too long stuff but I know no shorter ways of letting you know how I feel about them..
Everytime I read something from u I find my self more in love with ur writings ..cos thru ur writings I feel like I get to learn more about u.
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April 21, 2017 at 4:39 pm
Except Riley hurting Tippy, everything is nice… Something different and interesting…
Waiting for you next post…
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April 22, 2017 at 7:32 am
Just cause you kept motivating me and kept asking for a new series it drove me to write this! Thank you for the support Dalj.. from the very very beginning to now.. all your support has definitely changed me in many ways!
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April 22, 2017 at 8:45 am
Awww!!🙃…
Thank-you for writing a whole new series just because of me…
That meant a lot… Thank-you so much…
And “all my support” is only because of “all your great work”…
With loads of Love.
– Your Mr. Emotional 🙈😘✌
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April 21, 2017 at 4:46 pm
This one came as a surprise. Oh babe I’m loving it. 😊😊
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April 22, 2017 at 7:29 am
If it wasn’t for you little love bunnies I’d never even think of another series! This constant support is absolutely heartwarming! 😙✌
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November 16, 2017 at 6:00 pm
Miss your writings. I hope you give me that.
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November 17, 2017 at 3:32 pm
I miss them too..
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April 21, 2017 at 4:49 pm
Poor Tippy! I wonder why Riley is behaving this way. Can’t wait for more!
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April 22, 2017 at 7:27 am
Thankyou for the support yuhu! Will post the next part today!! 😏👆
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April 22, 2017 at 8:06 am
Looking forward to it!
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April 21, 2017 at 6:41 pm
Wow this feels totally different!! Feels like somthing totally different is going on hmmmm…. awesome chaos! Can’t wait for the next one! I’m sooo curious!😁
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April 22, 2017 at 7:25 am
Bro!!!! Thought you were supposed to be studying!! 😄✌
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April 22, 2017 at 7:34 am
Haha just dropped by in my break times!✌😅🙈
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April 21, 2017 at 6:53 pm
It was really very interesting and uniquely different.
I am all hooked up and will be waiting for the next one.
Much love.
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April 22, 2017 at 7:23 am
Thank you heaps Moushmi sweets! All this support is so heartwarming! Will not keep you’ll waiting and will not drag the series!! xoxo 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 12:48 pm
🙂
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April 21, 2017 at 9:42 pm
Riley, great story. How long do we need to wait.
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April 22, 2017 at 7:21 am
An episode a day which keeps the grumbles away! 😏✌
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April 21, 2017 at 11:17 pm
It’s some different from what you usually write. I loved the story and waiting for next part now😊😊
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April 22, 2017 at 7:21 am
Thank you for the support Mehul! U guys have no idea how valuable these comments are to me! Much love! Xoxo 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 7:42 am
Your welcome friend😊😊
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April 21, 2017 at 11:31 pm
Come on, not the dog.
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April 22, 2017 at 7:19 am
Hahaha…I love this comment! 😄
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April 21, 2017 at 11:40 pm
Beautifully written.
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April 22, 2017 at 7:18 am
Thank you Kaws hun! Much love! Xoxo ✌
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April 22, 2017 at 12:22 pm
You are so welcome my love.
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April 22, 2017 at 12:19 am
Powerful stuff. Btw I have a nephew named Riley and I love the name 😃🐻
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April 22, 2017 at 7:17 am
Haha that’s awesome! I did put a lot of thought into the choice of names. Thanks hun! 😙✌
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April 22, 2017 at 1:48 am
Great choice for the picture!
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April 22, 2017 at 7:17 am
I spent quite a lot of time looking for the pic! I’m glad you noticed it.. yay! Thanks!!
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April 22, 2017 at 2:47 am
Hola chaos, great descriptions as always! I have a suggestion that you’d like check your feedback! ^-^ Great work!💫
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April 22, 2017 at 7:07 am
As in I need to stop being a bad gurl and reply to the comments on my stuff ya? 🙈
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April 22, 2017 at 7:36 am
Didn’t quite get you there. Did you check your email?
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April 22, 2017 at 7:42 am
I asked you if you were meaning that I should reply to these comments on my posts! Have you sent me an email?
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April 22, 2017 at 7:43 am
Nah, nope. Not that. And yes I sent you an email via the contact page
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April 22, 2017 at 5:14 am
This is really amazing and something unique. Eagerly waiting for the next part. 🙂
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April 22, 2017 at 7:15 am
Thank you she babe! I never liked writing series cause I thought not many people would be hooked up! Seeing all these comments, it’s really heartwarming!
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April 22, 2017 at 9:15 am
Keep penning more.😊
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April 22, 2017 at 5:34 am
Can’t wait for the next part!
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April 22, 2017 at 7:12 am
Will post a part a day and keep the grumbles away! 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 8:27 am
Hey! I would just like to let you know that I’ve nominated you for The Cramm Award! To know more about this, just take a look at my latest post ☺️
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April 22, 2017 at 8:27 am
Will do for sure! Thanks luv! 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 9:48 am
Poor Pomeranian:)
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April 22, 2017 at 10:36 am
The pompom is doing fine hun! :*
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April 22, 2017 at 10:37 am
Hi hi 🙂
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April 22, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Ahhhh!! Feels so good to read your writings again.
#purehatefordogs
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April 22, 2017 at 6:11 pm
It’s so great to have you back!
#thedogisokaynow
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April 23, 2017 at 6:10 am
Wow! This is great. I love the sadist atmos
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April 24, 2017 at 10:42 am
Much love Tom! You’ve making my days brighter!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:39 pm
Ooohhh…a very unique style of writing!! … 👌👍
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April 24, 2017 at 10:51 am
I’m so happy u like it! Thanks Sif!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:51 pm
Wow! Another dark series from the queen of darkness. This one sounds terse, like a coiled cobra, in waiting…
Pradita from thepraditachronicles.com
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April 24, 2017 at 10:55 am
Series are such a nerve wrecking task for me to keep up with it. You’d probably relate to that…thanks for the follow up Pradi! Much love!
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April 24, 2017 at 11:21 am
Oh yes, I know what you’re talking about. But you seem be doing the smart thing in keeping it limited to just 4 parts. I’m an idiot. My ongoing one will soon be stepping into the 19th part, and it looks like it’s still got 3 mor le parts going. I’m so frigging tired of it myself 😩 I know you’ve written some waaaaay beyond that. I don’t know how you do it 🙏
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April 24, 2017 at 12:35 pm
Yours was lovely.. and I enjoyed it to the most! just that all that waiting for it and getting busy and losing track was what got me delayed in catching up!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:39 pm
I know… Thus ones stretched out for far too long. I just don’t seem to have the time or the energy to keep writing it. But thank you for the compliment babe. Coming from you, it’s an honour indeed 🙏
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April 24, 2017 at 3:43 pm
After spying on all the comments, and feeling sorry for not reaching it sooner, I am going to write this! *stretches his panda arms*
It’s totally different from what you write!! (now i know that everyone had said that too) but you know why it’s so different? Because this time your piece of fiction didn’t include that touch of poetry, making it feel more authentic and easy to follow.
Coming to the story, you gotta tell me why this character is like this! Because this character is so complex, It’s amazing, because I love to read unique characters! (I just hope that you have a great backstory to justify her behaviour, that’ll be so fun to read)
P.S. I am sorry for reading it too late, but I am glad that when I am finally reading it, everything’s posted. My soul won’t die in restlessness! 😂😂😂
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April 29, 2017 at 2:25 pm
Too much of poetry in writings is like salt in your coffee ain’t it?
I’m happy this was easier to read!
This character is like this cause he was deprived of the love he thought he deserved!
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April 29, 2017 at 2:36 pm
Haha, not like salt in the coffee, bit a candy in my coffee, difficult to chew along with drinking coffee…
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April 29, 2017 at 2:26 pm
Absolutely loved the last bit of your comment!! 😄
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April 25, 2017 at 5:43 am
Climax is amazing 🙏🙏
Seems interesting now move to next part
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April 25, 2017 at 2:12 pm
Haha thanks a lot! I’m so happy you’ve read through the whole series!!
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April 26, 2017 at 2:00 am
Welcome
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