The only good thing about this crappy anniversary celebration is how it reminded me of my childhood Christmas nights. How I had all the toys to myself, how I never had to share my favorite water flamingo with her, how I never had to hide my crayons from her, how mom and dad used to love me so much and how happy I used to before Cynarah was born.
They used to love me so much..
The familiar sense of hatred rushed in. I felt a sting in my head. Arrgh.. It was happening again. The ticking began. My mind recognised the whispers. It echoed in swirls, the drums louder, the whispers clearer. All in a perfectly harmonious blend. The piecing screams were icy. They hurt my ears. The voices were chanting a different hymn; it was soothing, but it hurt, it was loud. and the flashlight, or was that a flare? Someone was shining it right into my face and they wouldn’t stop. Tell them to stop! No.. wait. It’s okay. They were helping me. They want to save me.
I suddenly opened my eyes.. The corner of my lips curled into a smile. I felt my right eye switch and the house was spinning. This drowsiness doesn’t last long though..
I sat down on the highest step Leaning my head against the polished railings and looked down at all the people. They were all so happy! And me, I was like all these legos. Scattered all over..in pieces. Cynarah’s favorite doll, Saddy, looked right at me from the toy box. She was laughing at me. Again. I remember how Cynarah had cried the last time I cut off Saddy’s hair. I remember how I cried too. It was the first time dad grounded me.
I picked Saddy out and started into her green humiliating eyes. The pink smile perfectly painted on the shining plastic made her look happier than I was. How unlucky for her.. How can a doll named Saddy not be sad? I held her head and twisted it around until I heared it crack. I raised her arm until it broke off her body, I twisted the two ugly legs and ripped them off too.
“There you go Saddy, you can be sad like me now”
I walked up to the balcony clutching its pieces close to my body. Giving it one last smile I flung it off the balcony watching it fly into the air and it’s pieces fall down hittin the roof of the abandoned hut in our backyard.
That would teach this piece of shit doll to never laugh at me again.
“Riley….!! Come say Hi to Aunty Yohani.. She has a surprise for you!” My mom yelled at the top of her voice!
I hated aunty fatass Yohani but surprises were my piece of cake! I skipped down the stairs in my pyjamas.
To be continued…
© chaos–xd 2017 • Harmony
Disclaimer: No doggies were hurt in the making of this series. Tippy’s wounds are healed and is doing fine now!
April 22, 2017 at 2:45 pm
Exquisite piece on a younger member of a family.
Chaos’ finest piece yet, awaiting for the continuation.
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April 22, 2017 at 6:13 pm
It’s an honor to have this comment from you! I’ve got loads of your writings pending to read and I will get to them soon Bryan! Thank you for your support! 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 11:53 pm
It is a pleasure for my eyes. Haha
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April 22, 2017 at 2:47 pm
Love how you showed all those sadness.. it felt so deep! I was so stuck into reading I didn’t realise I came to the end… I want more!!!!!
Last part tho I’m still laughing..😂 aunty (fatass) LMAO..
This has so much mixture of feelings love it!! Please write the next one soon!!! I’m getting more curious about Riley!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:30 am
These are the kinda comments that make you wana keep blogging all day bro! You make me feel awwwwh-sum!
Thank you Vaas! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 11:04 am
Hehe😏 so happy to here this from you😄
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April 22, 2017 at 2:56 pm
Ahhhhhh!!!! This is beautiful! I wonder what surprise aunty fatass has planned for Riley…
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April 24, 2017 at 10:22 am
Guess you already found out from the next episode! I’m sorry for being so late at replying! Thanks for the support Rav!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:53 pm
oh you posted the next part!! I’ll read it right away! And you need not be sorry babe 😉
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April 22, 2017 at 3:05 pm
This one takes us deep into the pyshe if this little gentleman ..it’s dark of course and you can even sympathize with him regardless his malicious ways..at the same time they seem horrific too and it gets u right in the middle of it. It’s getting to be like a trip down a downward spiral 🙂 can’t wait to see the next part
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April 24, 2017 at 11:04 am
Regardless of all the excitement your support adds up to my life you know what I enjoy the most about your comments? Bet u do..
Its the magical use of language.. your comments are out of the world and seems like they are poems and masterpieces itself!
I really hope u know how amazing you are and how lucky I am to have someone like you read and enjoy my writings!
😙✌
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April 22, 2017 at 3:07 pm
It’s a beautiful piece chaos. Cant wait for the continuation 😊👍🏼
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April 24, 2017 at 10:23 am
Thank you heaps honey! Hoping on bringing this series to an end today! I’m so glad you’re liking it! 😙✌
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April 22, 2017 at 3:09 pm
A boy who had so much to say, but no-one to hear. Feeling sad for Riley.
I want to reach the end as soon as possible but I don’t want the series to end soon 🙈…
Waiting for your next post Princess👑…
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April 24, 2017 at 10:31 am
Haha I’ve already pre named it for 4 pieces so I’m bound to end it today bro! Hope house enjoy! Much love! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 10:57 am
That’s more than enough Princess👑..
Thanks for writing and sharing…
Much more love in return 🌹💓💓💓🙈😘
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April 22, 2017 at 3:25 pm
You have a unique style of displaying emotions through your writing. Wow!!👌👌 Whenever I read a story with evil protagonist I can’t help but root for him (I don’t know if I am the only one) I believe in redemption. And I know this Riley guy is kinda fucked up but it makes me want to read about him more.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:28 am
Probably cause we all have them fucked up versions of us tucked under our smiles! Thanks for the support sugar bunny! :*
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April 24, 2017 at 12:28 pm
Exactly! You’re welcome😇
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April 24, 2017 at 3:50 pm
You got me there! I also feel bad for antagonists (evil protagonists) Even though in Indian daily soap, all the evil characters’ plans work, but in fiction, you gotta give them the chance!!! Let the evil king win and let him sit on the throne for once and let the world burn, just for once. And then defeat him.
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April 24, 2017 at 4:23 pm
Haha…I am glad I am not the only one who likes evil characters😈 Yeah you’re right. In fiction, they should be given a chance. They could be redeemed.
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April 24, 2017 at 4:29 pm
What does it mean? They could be redeemed?
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April 24, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Redemption is like salvation. Evil people could be saved from doing more sin or bad things, could turn into good ones.
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April 25, 2017 at 2:40 pm
Ohhh, that’s a good idea. But I think what’s evil has done can’t be undone, so evil can’t be turned into a good one. 😊
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April 25, 2017 at 3:55 pm
Haha…yeah! In some cases it does happen but in some cases it doesn’t.
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April 22, 2017 at 5:08 pm
What is next? I will be waiting to find out.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:32 am
Thank you for the support Mah Mel. I’m ending the series today! 😏✌
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April 22, 2017 at 5:37 pm
It’s a very fine piece!! I like your writings very much!!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:32 am
Wow you’ve made my day doodlyboodly! 😙✌
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April 22, 2017 at 5:41 pm
I empathise with Riley… even though, you depicted him sort of an evil guy.. And that fantasy aunt, I am waiting to know what surprise does she have…
Awesome read QueenD!!!😊😊❤
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April 24, 2017 at 10:33 am
Fantasy aunt nehi deedee! Fatass aunt! 😭
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April 24, 2017 at 1:15 pm
Oh lord! I am gonna have a serious talk with the autospell checker…
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April 22, 2017 at 6:17 pm
This poor kid is messed up!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:34 am
He sure is.. usually messed up kids seem to be really normal that it’s scary how much can actually go on in their heads
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April 24, 2017 at 12:32 pm
That is absolutely true!
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April 23, 2017 at 12:40 am
Loved this – can’t wait to read more 🖤
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April 24, 2017 at 10:41 am
Thank you heaps and tons! I’ve sorta been a bit edgy when it came to series cause I thought not many people enjoyed it.
I’m loving the support!
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April 23, 2017 at 2:07 am
Beautiful piece it is !
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April 24, 2017 at 10:41 am
Thank you bro! I’d not be writing if it wasn’t for yals support!
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April 24, 2017 at 1:50 pm
Your welcome.Sis !
Keep it up !
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April 23, 2017 at 3:43 am
Beautiful!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:42 am
Thank you heaps honey! ;*
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April 24, 2017 at 12:39 pm
You’re welcome!
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April 23, 2017 at 6:14 am
Getting darker with each one. Wonder where this leads
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April 24, 2017 at 10:43 am
There we are! You are keeping my series on flames! Love the support! Thank you! 😏✌
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April 23, 2017 at 7:24 am
Scary… As scary as reading Gillian Flynn. Waiting for the nest one
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April 24, 2017 at 10:43 am
Thank you heaps sugar bunny! 😙✌
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April 24, 2017 at 11:21 am
You’re welcome पीकम,
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April 24, 2017 at 11:21 am
That was supposed to be plum… I have a dumb phone that doesn’t know when autocirrect should kick in
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April 24, 2017 at 12:31 pm
Haha hate it when that happens!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:33 pm
Tell me about it 😐
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April 23, 2017 at 9:13 am
This is very odd. I was in my mum’s over stuffed room and opened up a tiny box which should have held something in the jewel category. THERE WAS A DOLL IN PIECES! All those appendages and the head squished into this box. Then, I see your post! Sheesh——-can’t wait to see what happens next! (note: Agatha Christie wrote a story about a doll that kept showing up in a room, the doll got tossed out into the street. A little picked it up and you never know what happens next!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:44 am
Haha that book sounds like something I’d love and the random doll incident was creepy!! Haha.. hope you enjoy your read honey! 😙✌
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April 24, 2017 at 10:53 am
It was in a short story novel of hers. Totally creeped me out, I had to look at make sure it was Agatha Christie!!!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:41 pm
…the disclaimer!! 😜😜😜
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April 24, 2017 at 10:51 am
Lol, bro!!! People were hating on me 😭
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April 24, 2017 at 7:53 pm
Oh is it!! 🙄 I was wondering why the disclaimer!!
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April 24, 2017 at 3:55 pm
Now, the world crashes down the moment a sibling enters your house!!! Muhahaha… (I just felt the pain of my sisters after reading this, since I am the smallest one in the house)
So that’s why Riley is like this. (Note: I like their names, how did you come up with them?)
I was so hooked while reading this!! And I am so glad I am reading it after it’s all posted. You know, my restless panda soul!
Just one thing more, the part quoted below how amazing of an observant you are, I fell in love with this line.
“And me, I was like all these legos. Scattered all over..in pieces.”
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April 29, 2017 at 2:18 pm
I love the names too! I’m just worried how Riley sounded like a girl name.. 😒
Don’t we all feel scattered like legos sometimes!
Thanks for all the support! 😙✌
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April 29, 2017 at 2:19 pm
Please don’t kill me for thinking Riley as a girl… Please forgive me your majesty!
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April 26, 2017 at 6:24 am
Cynarah, no matter how many times I repeat the name it sounds sweeter than before. Loved the names Riley and Cynarah. And your choice of images as always.
There you go saddy ,you can be sad like me now..made me sad as well.
And most of the times , surprises are not real surprises. I Like the way how Riley gets excited about the surprise though he hated his aunt.
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April 28, 2017 at 5:16 pm
i flip in joy when people notice the little details like names and images and you never cease to excite me..i love the name Cynarah too!
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April 28, 2017 at 5:17 pm
I never notice all that. You make me notice yours😊😊
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May 1, 2017 at 8:06 am
You ave been very expressful here.
I am only glad that I don’t have to wait for your continuation, I will head right there. 😀
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May 1, 2017 at 8:38 am
haha! thankyou babe! :*
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