The sunlight was beaming through my window and I knew it was a new day when I woke up to silky pigtails brushing against my skin, soft little fingers clutching my arm. “I wanth thu speak thu mommy” Droplets of tears escaped her eyes. Her soaked eyelashes and rosier cheeks gave away how much she had been crying.
“They’ll come back Cyn”
I playfully pulled off the hairbands of her pigtails releasing her chocolate-brown curls that framed her doll face and got out of bed. Her little mouth still wiggled to set free her waterworks and a crying baby sister didn’t seem like a fun way to begin my day!
“Let’s play hide and seek” I tried to imitate fatass Yohani ‘s fake excitement suggestion and it seemed to work fine. She sniffed off the tears that were threatening to pour out. Phew, that badass save though! This wasn’t so bad after all. “Let’s make this fun. Let’s hide and we’ll prank aunty Yohani into thinking we’ve been kidnapped.”
Cynarah’s eyes brightened for a moment and faded back into her poop mood.
“Buth ..but.. wouldn’t she be angwy?” “Awh come on Cyn! She said it was all-play-days for us”Little girls were so silly and easy to convince! We rushed downstairs in our pyjamas. I had to find her fluffy bunny flip-flops before we crept out of the kitchen door. Aunty Yohani was watering moms rose bed which she definitely loved more than she loved me.
I placed my finger on my lips signalling Cyn to keep it low while I tiptoed into the wooden hut behind our house. I held the door open so she wouldn’t make it creak too much when she came in. “Let’s tie ourselves up.” Cyn was so excited she had already crossed her wrists and held them towards me. I grabbed a roll of red ribbons from mom’s old crafty basket that sat on a dusty table.
“Turn around” I whispered. Pulling her arms behind her I tied her wrists together. The Ribbons were slipperier than I had anticipated but I did a good job with the knots. I carried her and sat her on the dusty table, my mind now zipped in excitement tied up her ankles too. I grabbed an old silk scarf from the basket and tied it tightly over her mouth.
I hadn’t warned her about the small bit of the plan I had in mind. I didn’t want to do it but I knew I had to.
To be continued..
© chaos–xd 2017 • Zip
(4/4) and it still continues .. never trust the chaos! 😏✌
April 24, 2017 at 2:49 pm
Oh dear! This is getting scarier each time!
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April 24, 2017 at 2:55 pm
Thank you heaps yuhu buddy! Having you guys comment moments after posting this is such a great feeling!
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April 24, 2017 at 3:59 pm
My pleasure!!! How many more parts to this story? Just curious.
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April 24, 2017 at 4:08 pm
You’re asking even though she said you can’t trust her… 😂😂
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April 24, 2017 at 4:09 pm
Ha Ha! That’s right!
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April 24, 2017 at 2:50 pm
Right now I’m like a kid crying for a lollypop promised to him, but not given.
😅
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April 24, 2017 at 2:54 pm
Haha bro I feel u.. I swear!
I tried so hard but the ending needed a solo episode yo.. didn’t want to make it too long then it would get boring you see!
The promise is for tomorrow! You shall have your lollipop! 😙👌
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April 24, 2017 at 3:19 pm
Hmmm… I understand… The work has to be done as per requirement.
Looking forward to my lollypop. 😋
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April 24, 2017 at 2:58 pm
Well….. I have a bad feeling about this.. I feel something really scary is gna happen!! Hmmm for Rileys character I don’t think it’s just a game!
Thought u said this is da last epi😝 so happy there’s gna be another one!! So exited also ! Pls write sooon!!! 😀
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April 24, 2017 at 3:03 pm
Half way through I realised I couldn’t end it in 4 episodes. The finale needed it’s own epi bro.. so tomorrow would be the promises finishing!
Thank you for following up even during your study times (which you shouldn’t be doing) lol 😝
All your motivational feedback is much appreciated bro! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 3:06 pm
Haha I know the exact times u post😝😂 so planed up my breaks accordingly😏 buckets of welcome😂😁✌
I’m sure it won’t end tmro😉
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April 24, 2017 at 3:13 pm
I need get me some ribbons asap oh the possibilities 😉
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April 25, 2017 at 2:32 pm
Haha.. you can get them from Cynarah after the next episode! 😄👈
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April 24, 2017 at 3:31 pm
My excitement is at its extreme.
My mind is making lots of guesses…
Now I’m waiting for tomorrow, like someone’s gonna buy me my favourite car…
🙃🙃🙃🙃
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April 25, 2017 at 2:32 pm
Your favorite car has been bought! I’m sorry I kept you waiting! 😭✌
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April 25, 2017 at 2:59 pm
Thanks for buying that for me🙈😊😘😘
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April 24, 2017 at 3:47 pm
This was disturbing, quite frankly. There might be some readers that can’t understand the sinister truth of what’s going on, but I guess I’m used to seeing the dark side of things. Good post, as always. I’m just curious though: what are you trying to say to your readers through stories like this? Are you advocating for something? Just curious!
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April 25, 2017 at 2:35 pm
I guess most of my readers are totally immune to my darkness and my endings get predicted regardless of how tactfully I twist it! Nothings been advocated on a delivering scale. Just bringing out some messed up realities giving the darkness lovers a joyful read!
Really appreciate your concern! Hope you’re having a great day DomDom!
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April 25, 2017 at 7:05 pm
I wouldn’t say we are immune to it, a lot of us are just writers that “know the signs”. That doesn’t mean the story doesn’t still have a dark effect!
And you’re welcome, I was just wondering. Hope you have a good one too!
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April 28, 2017 at 5:25 pm
looks like its high time i changed the “signs” 😀
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April 28, 2017 at 7:03 pm
Go for it! See if you can surprise me 😉
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April 24, 2017 at 4:17 pm
Well played Miss Dark Ji! Well played!
Even though I am so so so happy that it didn’t come to an end, my restless panda soul feel tricked! You betrayed it. (Jk, I love your surprises. Though I loved Aunty fatass’ surprise too.)
I feel so worried for her. I know you have the full right to kill her or save her, but please don’t.
I have just now faced a lot of deaths in an anime I am currently watching and every death is depressing as helll!!!!!!!!!
I’m talking about the FullMetal Alchemist Brotherhood!
Everyone who doesn’t deserve to die, dies!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Sorry for getting off the topic, this series is amazing as heaven! The way you play with words is always delughtful to read!
I loved it:
Her birth had set fire to my ribbon of happiness, which sucked away all the love and attention that was once all mine. (Not sure if this is from this episode)
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April 25, 2017 at 2:41 pm
Please accept my deepest sympathy for your loss. I’m sure there are a bunch of people who just swim through my comments just to read yours cause your comments are so uniquely cute and boil bubbly! You know the crazy bubbles that occur only in the extreme boily moments!! That’s boil bubbly!
Thank you heaps and bounds and to the moon and back and infinity and beyond for all your support throughout my blog journey!
Birth setting fire to my ribbon of happiness.. something I wrote in my journal about my brother. He’s still alive btw! 😒
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April 25, 2017 at 2:45 pm
I loved how you explained me the term ‘boil bubbly’ 😂😂😂
Well, you’re more than welcome, because mine journey too couldn’t be complete without so many here including you.
Coming to that brother part, 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Oh god, I think both of my sisters think just like you…. 😂😂😂😂 Lol
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April 25, 2017 at 2:53 pm
I wouldn’t mind exchanging brothers with your sisters! Haha.. boil bubbly.. I didn’t even know what I was typing! Just went back and read my comment! Lol 😄🙈
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April 25, 2017 at 2:54 pm
Haha… 😂😂😂😂 By the way, please check my comments on your previous parts too! Only when you get the time, since right now you must be bombarded with so many comments.
😂😂😂
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April 25, 2017 at 3:10 pm
Haha I was just swimming my way through the episodes hunting for your comments.. my notification secretion got tsunamid by yesterday’s community pool and the new episodes! I never miss a comment though..
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April 25, 2017 at 3:11 pm
Tsunamid… Your vocabulary never fails to amaze me! 😂😂😂
No worries!! I hope you swim easily through it…
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April 25, 2017 at 3:19 pm
Hahaha much love panda bear! 😙
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April 30, 2017 at 5:22 pm
I love this comment! ❤
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April 30, 2017 at 5:25 pm
Haha, you know what Di? Even I go over to my older posts and read all those comments and it gives so much happiness! Lol 😂😂😂
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April 24, 2017 at 4:18 pm
Oh dear!! You’re killing me😰😯
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April 25, 2017 at 2:41 pm
Oh Cynarah! Please wake up! 🙈😘
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April 25, 2017 at 2:46 pm
DO NOT BURN MY SOUL WITH SUCH COMMENTS!!!!
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April 25, 2017 at 3:09 pm
😭😭👌
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April 25, 2017 at 3:10 pm
You’re crying and appreciating at the same time. You just pinched salt on my wounds!!! Give Cyanarah back (the name is beautiful)
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April 25, 2017 at 3:18 pm
These comments just make me fall in love with this world. WordPress would have been incomplete without your boliy bubbliness!
If I ever have a daughter I’m naming her Cynarah!
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April 25, 2017 at 3:20 pm
That’s amazing!!!!
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April 25, 2017 at 3:57 pm
Haha…wake me up when next installment gets released!
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April 24, 2017 at 4:32 pm
First of all I love what you are doing to your readers..you get their hopes up in one moment only to shatter them to pieces in the next ..this part had assumed a less sinister tone from the beginning with all the apparent affection between the siblings ..it was also well supported by your magical combinations of word..the Beginning of this episode was like waking up to find the soothing rays of waking sun kiss you in the face as you lay on the grass among drops of due and flowers ..it even let you for a minute believe that shit is not gna be as unrelenting as what preceded..but you held us by the hand and lead us to the very core of chaos..you did it with your amazing language ..it was like a beguiling call of all that is pure and beautiful and when u are near enough it let the mask slip and showed it’s true face …
You have built the suspense like a master babe..I’m quite Willing to be guided into the core of insanity..cause ugliness holds as much truth as beauty..
I’m loving this as much as I love your poetry..can’t wait to read how this is going to end 🙂
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April 25, 2017 at 2:50 pm
Taking their hopes up a mountain and shattering them downhill. I’ve been blamed for that quite a lot and I love it! Having you say my words have a magical combination is bomb! Bro.. your combinations are flames!
“Held us by the hand and lead us to the very core of chaos” everytime you comment I fall in love with your language all over again!
I just want to keep quoting your phrases forgetting that this comment is even feedback for something I wrote!
“Cause ugliness holds as much truth as beauty” I’m. Lost. For. Words!
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April 24, 2017 at 4:45 pm
Heyyyyy this is not fair 4/4 means end….. This curiosity is killing me! Post the ending now!
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April 25, 2017 at 1:53 pm
Haha in was so thrilled to see this comment! The motivation is what makes my day tons better! Thanks love..
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April 24, 2017 at 4:49 pm
Cliffhanger…. Uff… I was waiting for it… “to be continued… Not fair… 😭
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April 25, 2017 at 1:53 pm
Haha I’m sorry! Didn’t mean to break the promise but the finale needed it’s unique episode and I only realized half way though! Much love! 😙✌
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April 25, 2017 at 2:28 pm
It’s alright! I’m still waiting though! 😄
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April 25, 2017 at 2:31 pm
I’ve posted it Madam! 🙈 I’m sure you’ll love it!
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April 25, 2017 at 4:13 pm
You did! I’ll go through your blog… 😊
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April 24, 2017 at 4:54 pm
Waiting for 5/4 😀
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April 24, 2017 at 5:50 pm
Bro! This comment got me right in the guts! 🙈 Haha (5/4)
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April 24, 2017 at 10:48 pm
The suspense! 😳
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April 25, 2017 at 2:12 pm
Haha.. I’m sorry honey! Posted the finale a few hours early today! Needed to get the suspense off my back! Lol hope you enjoy!
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April 24, 2017 at 11:50 pm
Beautiful. Love it.
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April 25, 2017 at 2:12 pm
Thanks hun! I’m loving all the support!
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April 25, 2017 at 7:01 pm
You’re welcome. I love to give it to you!!
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April 25, 2017 at 5:55 am
Actually I predicted that moment cz of your writing
I knew that darkness will be there soon
And now let’s see
How much horrible ,it will be
I love horror stories
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April 25, 2017 at 2:45 pm
I usually pour in all my darkness and gore when I write something! I hope you like the ending!
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April 26, 2017 at 2:01 am
Let me read !
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April 25, 2017 at 5:55 am
Make it horror more and more
I am waiting for next
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April 25, 2017 at 2:16 pm
Yes sir! 👌
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April 26, 2017 at 2:14 am
For god sake don’t call me sir
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April 28, 2017 at 5:21 pm
do u share your name on the blog? its kinda weird to call you “confused” lol
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April 28, 2017 at 5:41 pm
Omg I asked same question in plane way
But believe answer is not same
I am shubhankar
Or you can call me confused , it’s not weird even I love this word .
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April 29, 2017 at 1:42 pm
Sure thing! 👌
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April 25, 2017 at 5:40 pm
What? Part 4/4? Where’s the rest?
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April 29, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Posted it! 🙈 Haha.. sorry I just couldn’t end it here!
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April 29, 2017 at 2:20 pm
Yay! i was like ‘this can’t be it! She can’t leave us in a limbo’. Going now to read it before my Fone Free Day starts.
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April 26, 2017 at 6:53 am
I wanth thu speak thu mommy..so cute😊😊 ..I like when Riley calls Cynarah cyn. Doesn’t this guy have a little love in the corner of his heart. I’m sure he has.
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April 28, 2017 at 4:14 pm
i bet he has something very strong which often switches between love and hate!
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April 28, 2017 at 5:20 pm
Yes..though you have not portrayed it, I can feel it. May be you should try writing a story with dilemma. You can make us drown in emotions with your words.
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April 29, 2017 at 4:10 pm
Amazing story. I saw it today. Lovely. 🙂
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April 29, 2017 at 4:11 pm
Was missing your comments! Thanks love!
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April 29, 2017 at 4:15 pm
I was missing your posts too dear. ❤
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May 1, 2017 at 8:10 am
You have broken it up exactly where required giving it perfect timing.
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May 1, 2017 at 8:36 am
thank you love! im so glad youre enjoying the read!
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May 1, 2017 at 8:53 am
Of course I did! You have the knack dear, more so than me,
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