Unhear my painful
stinging cry.
I shall be chained
from my gleeful fly.
In my cage
I sit alone
Singing for you
From dusk till dawn.
Your prisoner
I shall be
Because my God
It pleases thee!
© chaos–xd 2017 • Control
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A Glimpse of Darkness 
May 2, 2017 at 6:07 pm
Sad, but of course, beautiful! Sometimes we are our own prisoners.
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May 3, 2017 at 4:29 pm
Thank you love!! 😘👌
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May 11, 2017 at 1:39 pm
You’re welcome!
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May 2, 2017 at 6:10 pm
I always wanted to kick Cpt Hook when he caged Tinkerbell. Oddly, I find this is a theme in many fantasy stories. Cage the lovely creature to sing for only thee…..Guess it goes back to bygone times. I appreciate YOU are unchained and sharing your voice!
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May 2, 2017 at 7:12 pm
In one of my recent posts we were discussing about caged birds…and now here we are!!! Can relate to it much more!!….and ufff the last lines were so impactful!!! I read the whole post again to reach the last lines and absorb them in my heart!!! Gem!!! 💎
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May 3, 2017 at 4:44 pm
Haha..thank you Sifar! I remember the caged bird convo.. it sure did contribute to this poem I guess .. thanks for making my day! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 4:46 pm
😊 i could feel that vibe here!! 😊
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May 3, 2017 at 4:30 pm
Thank you so much Kris! It’s definitely a fucked up and unfair world!
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May 3, 2017 at 6:07 pm
Yes. And then there are artists like you to send us spinning in different and better directions! :o)
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May 2, 2017 at 6:11 pm
Your prisoner I shall be, because my god it pleases thee. What a wonderful piece of writing.
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May 3, 2017 at 4:29 pm
Thank you Jen! Aren’t we all prisoners of the sinners!
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May 3, 2017 at 4:30 pm
That’s not a pleasant question to answer but yes, we are.
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May 2, 2017 at 6:30 pm
The last lines
‘Your prisoner
I shall be
Because my God
It pleases thee!’ Are bomb af. As is the whole poem.
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May 3, 2017 at 4:30 pm
Thank you Neeti gurl! 😏✌
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May 2, 2017 at 6:46 pm
Awesome poem. It’s really beautiful but also quite sad…
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May 3, 2017 at 4:31 pm
There’s always a pinch of sadness in everything beautiful I suppose! Thank you!
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May 3, 2017 at 4:39 pm
Yup there is.. Sadness in every beautiful thing..
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May 2, 2017 at 7:06 pm
Why?
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May 3, 2017 at 4:31 pm
Cause that’s how the world is!
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May 3, 2017 at 4:56 pm
I don’t think we agree on that note,but nevertheless perspectives
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May 2, 2017 at 8:28 pm
What am I missing here? You are not a prisoner if you are choosing to remain caged to please someone.
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May 3, 2017 at 4:47 pm
I’m choosing to remain a prisoner cause it pleases the beast I fail to unlove I suppose!
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May 3, 2017 at 5:14 pm
Got your attention didn’t I. This shows a soft side to chaos, this was well written, intense, filled with feeling.
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May 2, 2017 at 10:20 pm
Another beautiful piece from you chaos, it exemplifies greatly of the the word control. 💕
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May 11, 2017 at 3:29 pm
Thank you so much! Please excuse my delay to reply.. this comment slipped through my notifications!
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May 11, 2017 at 3:37 pm
No problem 😊 It’s okay 😊
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May 2, 2017 at 11:56 pm
Your images are always spot on 🖤
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May 3, 2017 at 4:51 pm
Wow! I absolutely love it when my images get noticed!!! Thanks 😍👌
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May 3, 2017 at 12:21 am
Beautiful
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May 3, 2017 at 4:51 pm
Thank you heaps! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 5:28 pm
😊
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May 3, 2017 at 12:41 am
Beautiful piece. Even though I’ve experienced so much healing I still feel caged. Thanks for sharing. I’m so glad I’m not alone. We all feel this way I’m sure.
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May 3, 2017 at 4:52 pm
Love the fact that you relate to the purest emotions behind this piece of writing! Hugs hugs!
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May 4, 2017 at 12:59 pm
Thanks. Hugs right back to you!
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May 3, 2017 at 1:40 am
Being caged… aren’t we always caged someway or the other? Caged by expectations, by situations.
Wonderfully written, as always 👍💐
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May 3, 2017 at 3:15 am
To spread my wings
Across hells fire,
To break my strings
And reach a bit higher,
Was all my heart ever desired
Like a would I’d constantly pick.
Cause my heart would burn in Hell’s fires
Cause my heart couldnt have what it most desired
All my heart’s done is grown sick
A bitter companion for the wounds id pick..
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May 3, 2017 at 5:51 am
😍😍😍 Woow… The poetic comments that you leave wherever you go. It is so delightful to read.
Cause my heart couldn’t have what it most desired! 😍
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May 3, 2017 at 5:53 am
U should thank chaos for these 🙂 whatever I write anymore I write for her ..
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May 3, 2017 at 5:56 am
You share a strong bond of friendship with her, I can see that in your comments!
P.S Bro, I still don’t get any notification whenever you reply to my comment… You should find a solution for this. 😊
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May 3, 2017 at 5:58 am
It’s not just friendship..she’s my everything 🙂
I’ll see what I can do about the notifications but I have no idea where to check lol
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May 3, 2017 at 6:02 am
I’m still curious about the post that she said she would make about you and how she made this blog! 😆😆
Try wordpress ‘help’ I think reading FAQs will help, or maybe you can talk to their online service, if there is any. I never new you were blogging since 8 years!!!!!
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May 3, 2017 at 6:08 am
I’m curious too..we shared a history together..I used to write a lot back then..but I wasn’t blogging like u guys are doing now..I just made this blog to post what I wrote ..with no intention of ever having anybody read them..and what little readers I get now are thru chaos..even now I don’t wanna promote my shit cos I don’t make new posts..but I’m staying around cos I like reading
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May 3, 2017 at 6:04 pm
Bonded by ice and fire for an eternity and beyond! ❤
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May 4, 2017 at 3:19 pm
That’s interesting! You must be the fire, then? lol
I am really waiting for your post about him. *wink* hahaha
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May 11, 2017 at 2:33 pm
Ah yes.. I completely shut myself out of WordPress for a week! The post about him shall be up within the next few days.. months or years! I’m the queen of procrastination so yeah! 😒👆
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May 15, 2017 at 10:03 am
I’m so sorry for the late reply. I had too completely shut myself out of WordPress for a week! LOL
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May 3, 2017 at 6:14 pm
Baabe.. I’m smiling at the phone not knowing how to reply to the sudden poem! I loved the last two verses the most!
You’re amazing!!
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May 3, 2017 at 5:53 pm
Absolutely! Thank you so much! Much love! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:03 pm
✌ 💐💐
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May 3, 2017 at 2:17 am
He sees the future..
Knowing the past..
Patience is the key..
For the freedom you seek..
Awesome poem chaos!!! Something made me say these lines😊✌
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May 3, 2017 at 5:54 pm
Beautiful! You are also replying with poems like my crownlessxx! 😄👌
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May 3, 2017 at 3:20 am
To spread my wings
Across hells fire,
To break my strings
And reach a bit higher,
Was all my heart ever desired
Like a would I’d constantly pick.
Cause my heart would burn in Hell’s fires
Cause my heart couldn’t have what it most desired
All my heart’s done is grown sick
A bitter companion for the wounds id pick..
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May 3, 2017 at 6:15 pm
❤❤
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May 3, 2017 at 5:49 am
She sits alone, and sings dusk till dawn!
Like a caged nightingale with her wings cut!
It makes me sad!!
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May 3, 2017 at 5:52 am
Even though I find your writings heartbreaking but I can’t stop admiring your style to change someone’s mood so quickly!!! 😍😍
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May 3, 2017 at 5:58 pm
Thank you for admiring my evilness! 😙✌
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May 4, 2017 at 3:17 pm
It’s not something that I will call “evilness” Though I really admire everything you write! 🙂
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May 11, 2017 at 2:32 pm
Heart-breaking-ness! 😄👌
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May 3, 2017 at 5:56 pm
Thank you! Sadness is the motive of my writing.. I’m sorry! 😭👌
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May 3, 2017 at 5:52 am
Deep, very deep! Loved it..
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May 3, 2017 at 5:58 pm
Thank you heaps bro! ✌
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May 3, 2017 at 8:00 am
Beautiful piece so well composed Chaos. Great poem with an awesome pic.
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May 3, 2017 at 6:09 pm
It really excites me when people notice the pics as most of your are already aware by now.. but hey! Thanks a lot!! 😏✌
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May 4, 2017 at 5:19 am
Welcome Chaos.
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May 3, 2017 at 12:15 pm
I’m in this unbreakable cage
Watching outside, seeing the other birds flying, chirping, cherishing life
And here I am, waiting for you
To open the door of the cage
Cause you have the key
To my freedom.
As I see you looking at my cage
I desperately start flapping my wings
So you can understand; I want freedom
And then I see you smiling at my cage, and leave
This is the moment I remember
You are the only one who can free me
But you won’t, as
You are the one who imprisoned me
See your poem let my heart write these sentences spontaneously! My mind got deep into the feelings. Loved your poem.❤
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May 3, 2017 at 6:12 pm
Haha..this was unexpected!
Painfully beautiful though.. we often tend to try hard to impress the ones who inflict pain on us regardless of how badly it hurts!
Thank you heaps! 😏✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:16 pm
Unfortunately this is the truth….we just love the person who hurts the most and seriously don’t know why…like the heart becomes the slave…we just can’t get out of these hecks!
You’re always welcome 😊 ✌
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May 3, 2017 at 3:53 pm
WOW!!
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May 11, 2017 at 3:30 pm
Thanks babe! 😏✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:05 pm
Your poems are so beautiful and haunting. ❤
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May 11, 2017 at 3:30 pm
Hope they haunt away the sadness in all our miserable lives! 😙✌
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May 4, 2017 at 8:20 am
Have you ever tried a Limerick?
Great one btw, as always!👌
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May 11, 2017 at 3:31 pm
Haha.. I haven’t. have you?
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May 4, 2017 at 7:20 pm
as dark and as heartbreaking as usual </3 – good job!
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May 11, 2017 at 2:38 pm
New moon plan! You have made my day! I failed to reply on the community pool..
Ironical how I asked people to come “brighten” My blog didn’t I? Haha.. your comments on the replies made me giggle at my own comment! 😄👌
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May 11, 2017 at 3:08 pm
haha yeah that comment of yours seriously caught me off guard 😀 and don’t worry, I figured it was a rather busy week for you, too huh. I haven’t been around here so much myself lately. Too much crap to deal with during this week.
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May 7, 2017 at 8:58 pm
Hello chaos-xd. I really like your blog and would like to nominate you for the Versatile Bloggers Award. If you would like to accept the nomination, please visit https://birdflight.blog/2017/05/07/the-versatile-blogger-award/ for details.
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May 11, 2017 at 2:59 pm
Will check it out birdy! Thanks for the nomnom! 😏✌
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May 8, 2017 at 7:45 pm
This post of yours can’t bring us more back to reality. We do make ourselves our own prisoners by putting ourselves in uncontrollable situations. Why do we do this? Keep ourselves locked?
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May 11, 2017 at 1:05 pm
It’s a pity isn’t it.. thanks for your comments! 😏✌
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May 9, 2017 at 3:25 am
Your poems are truly beautiful!
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May 11, 2017 at 1:00 pm
Thanks babe! 😙✌
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