I always feared
the pain
Of death.
But
After
the flowers
At my tomb
Withered into crusts
And the darkness
Blanketed
My cozy grave
I realized
That the pain of living
Hurt more
than the pain
Of dying!
© chaos–xd 2017 • None
Other poems
- Insanity •°
- Goodbye•°
- Insomniac•°
- You!
- Venom •°
- Caged
- Burn
- Heartless
- Silent Darkness
- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Eternity •°
- Forever•°
- Chaos
- Drowning•°
- Embraced
- Evanescent
- Masks of Death °•
- °•Rubbish
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
- No more
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May 3, 2017 at 3:42 pm
Wow! Perspective!
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May 3, 2017 at 6:16 pm
The first comment to put a smile on my face! Thank you Darren.. 😏✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:25 pm
Any time!
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May 3, 2017 at 3:46 pm
Just wow..the pain of living hurt more than the pain of dying. Death is one time pain but life kills us little everyday. Beautiful as always, moon.
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May 3, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Stole the words right out of my mouth. Living is more painful,
This is beautiful Chaos !
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May 3, 2017 at 6:18 pm
Thank you so much cwhiteweb!! Much love! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:17 pm
Thank you Jen! Slow killing is definitely much more painful than being actually dead! 😒👆
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May 3, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Wow. Scary. But from a perspective,wonderful
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May 3, 2017 at 6:18 pm
Thank you to the moon and back! Pandas should fear death! 😄👌
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May 4, 2017 at 4:38 am
Hahaha. Ya!
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May 3, 2017 at 3:52 pm
A new perspective, thought provoking. Maybe death is living and living is death, or neither is either. Just thinking.
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May 14, 2017 at 2:15 pm
This comment fascinated me so much I didn’t know what to say about it.. thank you so much Mr.Mel!
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May 3, 2017 at 3:53 pm
It’d be an irony if the name of my post is iheartlife and I love poems based on death. But actually, as I’ve tried to love life even if it gives poison bites, and sometimes I just break down…and there’s when I gain love for poems based on death…
Anyway; I actually love all your poems❤
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May 14, 2017 at 2:16 pm
Poems about death .. wow that reminds me of crownlessxx who you’re already following!
Haha your name sure is ironical.. and what I love about you the most is how well u blend with the bitter truths of this miserable life!
Love you pumpkin! 😙✌
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May 14, 2017 at 4:04 pm
Yeah….crownlessxx whom I’d surely follow for sure….irony in my posts are distributed everywhere….and blending is a way to make the readers think and finally find the irony….love you “dark” chocolate muffin (if you know what I mean😂😊❤)
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May 16, 2017 at 4:21 pm
Hahaha.. love you too my bipolar pudding! 😙
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May 16, 2017 at 4:29 pm
Love u my muffin❤
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May 3, 2017 at 4:00 pm
Perfecto!
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May 14, 2017 at 2:16 pm
Thankyouto! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 4:05 pm
Had to share this on my Facebook page. Hope you don’t mind! https://www.facebook.com/Poet.Robinson
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May 14, 2017 at 2:17 pm
Thanks Darren! I’m not on Facebook though. Sorry!
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May 3, 2017 at 4:28 pm
Deep…
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May 14, 2017 at 2:17 pm
Like our neighbours garbage pit? 😄
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May 14, 2017 at 2:44 pm
Yesssss!!!😂😂
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May 3, 2017 at 4:38 pm
Thank you for finally putting my trapped thoughts into words I couldn’t have put better
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May 14, 2017 at 2:17 pm
May the pleasure be mine! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 4:58 pm
Bro! This one is awesome af..always thought it was death that’s gods heavenly gift..not life..
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May 14, 2017 at 2:18 pm
I’d never write stuff like this if it’s wasn’t for the inspiration i got from you sunshine!
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May 3, 2017 at 5:25 pm
This iss beautiful chaos.. Just perfect
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May 14, 2017 at 2:18 pm
Thank you sweets! 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:36 pm
machan, factu factu factu … 👍👍👍 nicely said.
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May 14, 2017 at 2:18 pm
Romba romba thanks da! 😏✌
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May 3, 2017 at 6:49 pm
Death has to happen for life to exist. Change is a good thing. :o)
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May 14, 2017 at 2:19 pm
Haha it sure is honey! Thanks 😙✌
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May 3, 2017 at 7:03 pm
“Cozy grave” caught my attention!! 😛 …. Interesting!! Still munching on these thoughts! 😊
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May 14, 2017 at 2:20 pm
Haha.. hope they digest well! Thanks for all the support Sif! 😎✌
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May 4, 2017 at 12:36 am
OH Wow, I loved this. I think we’re all living and dying at the same time, and that’s what hurts so bad.
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May 14, 2017 at 2:20 pm
That’s so very true! Thank you heaps buddy! 😙✌
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May 14, 2017 at 9:08 pm
You’re welcome!
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May 4, 2017 at 2:00 am
All of your poems I feel could be described as “wow”, This is incredible!
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May 11, 2017 at 3:40 pm
And this comment was wow for me! Thank you! ✌😙
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May 11, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Your welcome!! Discarded is up by the way! Thanks for the help on creating it!
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May 11, 2017 at 3:55 pm
It was a pleasure! 😙✌
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May 4, 2017 at 2:59 am
Beautiful! One actually feels fear at thought of death but in reality death is tranquility. Great one!
Ujala
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May 11, 2017 at 3:39 pm
Absolutely! Thank you for your comment Ujala! ✌😏
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May 11, 2017 at 3:45 pm
😀
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May 4, 2017 at 3:59 am
Dark and beautiful. Stuck a chord.
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May 11, 2017 at 3:37 pm
Thank you Rish! ✌
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May 4, 2017 at 5:28 am
Agreed. Maybe death looks like an easy option for the ones who commit suicide. Living gives them unbearable pain.
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May 11, 2017 at 3:36 pm
Life is a process of slow killing.. people just fear the shortcut! 😒👆
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May 11, 2017 at 3:45 pm
Does that mean ending up your life requires more guts?
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May 11, 2017 at 3:48 pm
Doesn’t it?
People often consider a suicidal mind a weak one but ever imagined how much courage it would take to pull a trigger against your head that would shatter yours brains?
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May 4, 2017 at 5:36 am
Living does hurt more at times 🙂
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May 11, 2017 at 3:36 pm
It sure does! 😏✌
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May 4, 2017 at 6:55 am
This line just killed it! “I realized That the pain of living Hurt more than the pain Of dying!” Loved it. ❤
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May 11, 2017 at 3:35 pm
It was a complete random thought that came out beautifully! Thank you shee babe! 😙✌
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May 11, 2017 at 3:48 pm
My pleasure hun! 😍
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May 4, 2017 at 7:11 am
I love this! 🙂
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May 11, 2017 at 3:33 pm
Thank you heaps just bud! 👌
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May 4, 2017 at 8:19 am
Wonderful 👌
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May 11, 2017 at 1:23 pm
Thanks bro! ✌
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May 4, 2017 at 11:03 am
I think the pain of living is far more from the pain of dying.
Loved it a lot. Could feel the pain.
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May 11, 2017 at 1:23 pm
Thank you Moushmi! It’s a pleasure to see your comments!
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May 11, 2017 at 1:43 pm
Always a pleasure to read your posts.
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May 4, 2017 at 12:41 pm
Beautiful!
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May 11, 2017 at 1:24 pm
Thank you! 😙✌
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May 11, 2017 at 2:14 pm
You’re welcome!
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May 4, 2017 at 4:58 pm
Brilliant yet again. Im back by the way aha hope you are ok
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May 11, 2017 at 2:35 pm
Thank you! I’m well hope you are too! Keep in touch! 😏✌
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May 4, 2017 at 6:25 pm
I love the description.
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May 11, 2017 at 2:36 pm
Thank you! Death is always something that fascinates me!
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May 4, 2017 at 7:22 pm
Maybe dying doesn’t hurt at all! I love how you refreshed the looks of your blog by the way! 😀
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May 11, 2017 at 2:41 pm
Haha yes.. it was so normal and pale looking.. I’m so happy u noticed! You’re the first one to mention it! :*
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May 11, 2017 at 3:06 pm
haha well most of the time people don’t say anything even though they do notice the change but I seriously love the new header image and color scheme, so why not say it? 😀
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May 11, 2017 at 3:14 pm
You have made my day even better! Hugs hugs! 😙😙
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May 11, 2017 at 3:39 pm
haha that’s awesome – hugs back 😀
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May 6, 2017 at 1:28 pm
As always beautiful 🙂
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May 11, 2017 at 2:44 pm
Thanks sherin! ✌
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May 7, 2017 at 12:40 am
I like your article, very inspiring and thank you for your post
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May 7, 2017 at 8:30 am
Hey chaos-xd! I just wanted you to check out one of my recent blogs “the dark journey”(https://thisistapasi.wordpress.com/2017/05/04/the-dark-journey/)😊. But not just my writing, I’d tell you to check out the comment given by a sweet follower of us, Sifar(mybrokenwords.wordpress.com). It looks like he’s a big fan of both of us and he loves to read our writings!😄. And that’s an honor to have such a fellow. I thought I should inform you about Sifar,😌. People loves us😄✌❤
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May 11, 2017 at 2:45 pm
Haha Sifar is one of my favourites!
Wow and thank you so much for this comment and the link! I’m totally checking it out! 😍✌
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May 11, 2017 at 3:42 pm
Thanks for checking out darlo!❤
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May 8, 2017 at 4:51 pm
‘That the pain of living
Hurt more
than the pain
Of dying! ‘
Rightly said!
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May 11, 2017 at 3:02 pm
Thank you cupcake! 😙✌
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May 10, 2017 at 3:28 pm
Yup. Nailed it.
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May 11, 2017 at 12:57 pm
Yo thanks man! ✌
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May 11, 2017 at 1:07 pm
Is everything ok? Where have you disappeared??
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May 11, 2017 at 1:12 pm
I just managed to pull myself together and get my ass back here and post something!
Your concern made my day Sif!
Seriously! ❤
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May 11, 2017 at 1:14 pm
Oh you are back!! Thank God!! Are you alright??? I was worried…
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May 11, 2017 at 1:15 pm
I wasn’t!
I am now though.. 😏✌
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May 11, 2017 at 1:28 pm
Oh no…were you sick?? okay what happened… happened …. it’s over now and thankfully you are fine and back!! Happy now!!
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May 11, 2017 at 4:53 pm
Brilliant piece 😊 death embraces and comforts people who fear life and kills the dreams of people who love life !
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May 14, 2017 at 12:48 pm
Absolutely! Thank you coffee hun! 😙✌
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May 12, 2017 at 11:57 am
Death only spoke dark bitter truths
Where life was artfully lying
Drowning was calm and peaceful
Than looking at sky with thoughts of flying
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May 14, 2017 at 1:03 pm
Wow you’ve become so good at your art of spinning words even your comments come out in such beautiful poetry! 😍✌
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May 14, 2017 at 1:17 pm
This beautifully presented darkness did that to me.
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May 15, 2017 at 12:45 pm
So good 💛
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May 16, 2017 at 4:09 pm
Thank you luv! 😙✌
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May 16, 2017 at 2:39 pm
I got shivered the moment I read ‘Death’ another painful ‘heartbreaking’ read from you, but how did I forget it was written by you and it had to end amazingly, superbly and freaking awesomely!
The pain of living hurts more than the pain of dying, ahh, went straight through my panda heart!
P.S Why the hell am I so late in reading this!? God, what is happening with my reader. It doesn’t show up your posts. You just liked my recent post and I got back to you!
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May 16, 2017 at 4:08 pm
Amazingly superbly and freaking awesomely! Damn that adverbial shower just flooded my heart bruh! 😄✌
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May 16, 2017 at 5:29 pm
Probably… Depends how you die, though;) Great poem!
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May 19, 2017 at 3:11 pm
Haha of course! That’s reality slap just made me chuckle! 😄👈
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June 4, 2017 at 6:20 am
Hard hitting …and true
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June 11, 2017 at 7:52 pm
Thanks love! 😙✌
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June 10, 2017 at 10:00 am
Why are there posts soo dark..did you marry darkness???
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June 10, 2017 at 10:04 am
Yes..its more like I was born, bread, lived, consumed, embraced and died in the darkness!
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June 10, 2017 at 10:07 am
Ohh if you are dies..is your ghost speaking with me right now
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June 13, 2017 at 1:40 pm
Whoa! Kinda scary but awesome!
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June 13, 2017 at 1:46 pm
Haha..thanks buddy! ✌😏
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June 15, 2017 at 3:28 pm
Exactly
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June 16, 2017 at 10:53 am
You’ve truly out done yourself with this one simply amazing
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June 16, 2017 at 5:43 pm
It makes me so happy to see you catch up on my blog, Cory! Your feedback so greatly valued!
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June 16, 2017 at 5:45 pm
But of course dear friend your more than worth it, and your work speaks for itself, even still it’s amazing 🌼
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June 16, 2017 at 6:00 pm
Your kind words have made me feel so much better during my sorrowful days ..
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June 16, 2017 at 6:37 pm
Likewise is the emotion, never should you forget light can only exist due to the presence of darkness and vice versa, as we all know of what sorrow is to feel, I offer you the light that I do, same as you have myself in return thru your creations, it’s a balance…
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June 18, 2017 at 4:49 pm
These inked words could remove distress feel easily 😊😊
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June 18, 2017 at 4:53 pm
That’s definitely an honor.. thanks buddy! 😏👌
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