As I lay..
Injured in captivity,
I float through
The thorny fields.
Fields of love
Fields of flames
Trapped behind
The bittersweet games,
The raven caws
As darkness falls
In qualmy whispers
My name it calls..
The comforting fragrance
Of yesterdays venom.
Comforts my soul
In its darkest shalom.
I smile again..
This hymn I know..
It’s the tune that left
my heart so sore.
© chaos–xd • 2017 Qualm
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A Glimpse of Darkness 
May 16, 2017 at 3:44 pm
Before even reading it. I liked it!
Party time – I was the first one to like!!!! Yay!! 😂😂😂
It was as wonderful as your other poems! Your imagination is beyond any limits Miss Dark Ji!
I hope you’re all well! 😊
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May 16, 2017 at 3:45 pm
I’ve always missed the privilege of liking and commenting first in your writings!
I have in a few though! Thank you Harsh.. I need a little sting here and here to come up with writings as such! Much love! 😏✌
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May 16, 2017 at 3:50 pm
Hahaha, no problem!
And don’t need to mention that. Your writings have motivated me many time to write! So I should be the one thanking!
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May 16, 2017 at 3:52 pm
It has always been a heartfelt honor!
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May 16, 2017 at 3:48 pm
I smile again..
This hymn I know..
It’s the song that left
my heart so sore.
There’s something about these lines that makes this poem eerie and beautiful at the same time.
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May 16, 2017 at 3:49 pm
Thank you honey pudding.. I’ve been putting words together for this poem for the last couple of hours! Finally I’ve come to terms with my mind to agree and post it!
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May 16, 2017 at 4:03 pm
It’s like a trance, like being in some other realm. I don’t have proper words. Just wow. (I think you get it😁)
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May 16, 2017 at 4:31 pm
Damn gurl.. you never cease to make my day! The feeling is mutual! ❤
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May 16, 2017 at 4:32 pm
😇💕
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May 16, 2017 at 3:54 pm
The comforting fragrance
Of yesterdays venom
This thing gave me goosebumps….and an amazing pleasure. I loved this poem too much to explain💛
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May 16, 2017 at 3:55 pm
A sip of yesterday’s venom is always yummy ..just to remind us what dying left like.. isn’t it?
Giving a bipolar goosebumps is a bomb victory! Thank you TapTaps!
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May 16, 2017 at 4:25 pm
Omg I got a cute nickname….TapTaps!😍😘….may I have your email ID so we can chitchat?! I think I’d like to share some of my dark secrets of my past life with u….cause what we can’t share with closer people can do with the persons far away!
Much love my dark chocolate muffin❤✌
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May 16, 2017 at 4:27 pm
Cause only the darkness embraces the darkness! Of course..
simplesiteblogs@gmail.com
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May 16, 2017 at 4:28 pm
You use hangouts my love?
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May 16, 2017 at 4:33 pm
If you’ve any idea of ever rewarding the world’s most unsocialized person.. I’d be the finalist lol..
Sorry babe! No hangouts ..
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May 16, 2017 at 4:38 pm
The most unsocialized persons are the most successful….cause they spend their maximum time on preparing themselves for the best👌
That’s ok my love.❤
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May 16, 2017 at 4:04 pm
The comforting fragrance of yesterday ‘s venom
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May 16, 2017 at 4:41 pm
🐍🐍
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May 16, 2017 at 4:13 pm
Awesome words of deep venom and the picture was so apt
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May 16, 2017 at 4:29 pm
Thank you to the moon and back! My heart gallops in joy when people notice the pictures! 😄❤
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May 16, 2017 at 4:48 pm
Thanks and yes definitely the picture was perfect
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May 16, 2017 at 4:32 pm
I just love your poems so much! And the pic is so epic! Best pic I have ever seen! Just like your a amazing artist u choose and combine pictures perfectly too! Awesome poem chaos!!!😊
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May 16, 2017 at 4:36 pm
I’ve missed comments like this from you! This just completely brightened my day.. thank you so much Vaas! I remember the day we made this blog and it was like yesterday..
I never knew I could throw words together and create poetry! I was trying to create something for u.. and look where I am today!
And you noticed that I merged the pics didn’t you! I’m just entirely overwhelmed! Thank God you aren’t Deepika cause thank you thank you thank you! 😄✌
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May 16, 2017 at 4:42 pm
Wow your comment just made me smile and made me so happy! Maybe my nice comments faded away with my exam stress😭 anyway the old me is Back!! And I know you noh 😜 yea saw the merge😁 it’s super duper perfect it’s ma wallpaper!!! Haha those “dreadfull words” 😂
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May 16, 2017 at 4:42 pm
“The comforting fragrance
Of yesterdays venom.
Comforts my soul
In its darkest shalom.”
Your signature style lies in these lines. It’s dark, eerie and dangerously beautiful. Wow… 👌💐💐💐💐
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May 16, 2017 at 4:48 pm
The moment you mentioned the phrase “signature style” .. or was it “eerie” or.. “dangerous” or “Beautiful”.. haha I don’t know but you just sank my heart in unbearable waves of blissful joy! 😍
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May 16, 2017 at 5:26 pm
Oh that’s so kind of you… I am overwhelmed to know that my comments gives you so much happiness !! 😊😊
A big warm hearted welcome for you.. 💗💗
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May 19, 2017 at 3:12 pm
Hugs hugs Nemo love! 😙✌
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May 16, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Hey moon..I smile again..this hymn I know.loved this..happy night dear
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May 16, 2017 at 4:57 pm
You’re the one I love the most in this whole WordPress community!
Good night!
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May 16, 2017 at 5:06 pm
Did you really say that? I know I did nothing to get this much love from you..but I will take all the love. Thank you so much. My little heart can’t take so much happiness, all at once..good night dear..stay blessed.
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May 19, 2017 at 3:12 pm
😙 you’re more of a darling than you think you are!
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May 19, 2017 at 5:38 pm
You still think the same after the fight?😁😁gudnyt
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May 19, 2017 at 6:08 pm
Yes
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May 16, 2017 at 5:02 pm
Your poem takes me to feel deeper in my being, and in a beautiful way.
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May 19, 2017 at 3:13 pm
That’s amazing. I just smiled deeply reading this comment! Thanks babe
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May 17, 2017 at 2:31 am
Beautiful!
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May 19, 2017 at 3:08 pm
Much love! ✌
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May 20, 2017 at 12:51 pm
Thanks!
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May 17, 2017 at 2:57 am
Tho this poem did break my heart a bit (deserved it) I gotta agree that it’s so well put together..months of happiness seems always some what suspect and when it seems at last to crack, for the illuminated shell it is, when darkness seeps thru the tiniest of cracks like an old pal I can imagine why u would smile…cos I suppose In the back of ur mind u always knew it would return..and there is always strange sense of comfort in misery..cos dreams and joy can take u high..make u fear the fall..but in misery u can lay numb, dreamless and be cradled in the thought that u can fall no more…
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June 18, 2017 at 1:39 pm
I’m so happy you didn’t take it too personal.. its that I can only write with the feeling of pain so whenever I’m hurt I exaggerate it and try to make a post out of it..
This comment is so very beautiful .. you’re language always fascinated me! Hugs..
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May 17, 2017 at 9:56 am
Deeply personal?
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May 19, 2017 at 3:07 pm
It’s twins with Mariana Trench! 😭
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May 19, 2017 at 10:24 pm
In my book – that’s a good thing! 😀
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May 18, 2017 at 1:30 pm
Dear, this was just lovely.
With each of your posts, I keep falling in love with them, all over again.
I just love your writing.
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May 19, 2017 at 3:04 pm
Aww that just made my deadly tiresome Friday feel amazing!
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May 19, 2017 at 12:36 pm
The comforting fragrance of yesterday’s venom comforts my soul, ooooh really love this! What keeps you in bliss in the moment, might destroy you afterwards, but awareness of your destruction allows you to be comforted once more! You’re pretty GOATy chaos!
I nominated you for an award 🙂
https://iampharaohmaktuk.wordpress.com/2017/05/19/real-neat-blog-award/
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May 19, 2017 at 3:02 pm
* Bleat bleat * 🐐
Thanks heaps Sherif! 😎✌
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May 20, 2017 at 3:09 am
I found this post on Community Pool and wrote a comment there, to which you replied: “Thank you. I’ve never read anything from that author but if I’d to read something ..what would you suggest?” If you don’t mind reading fantasy — these stories do include elves, dwarves, and trolls — “The Silmarillion” and “Lord of the Rings” are worth the time. Thank you for following my blog; I’m looking forward to reading more of yours.
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May 20, 2017 at 4:19 am
Oops.. how ignorant of me. Didn’t know he was the writer of Lord of the rings! Totally checking it out.. Thank you for finding your way here to reply to the pool comment!
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May 22, 2017 at 3:10 am
No problem at all. I would recommend starting with “Silmarillion,” what happens in it sets the stage for a lot of what happens in “Lord of the Rings.”
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May 24, 2017 at 10:14 am
Added to my “to buy” list! Thank you! 😏👍
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June 2, 2017 at 11:20 am
There is pain where there is love.. we still smile with the feeling of love..
Nice my dear..
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June 4, 2017 at 8:24 pm
Beautiful! 👌
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June 5, 2017 at 6:21 pm
😁😍
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June 9, 2017 at 4:11 pm
thanks hun!
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June 9, 2017 at 4:29 pm
This is so beautiful….loved it
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June 9, 2017 at 4:32 pm
thankyou so much bud!! :*
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June 12, 2017 at 9:34 am
Oh wow!
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June 12, 2017 at 9:40 am
Yay! I’m happy you’ve checked them all out Raj! Will catch up on your writings soon! 😏
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June 12, 2017 at 9:51 am
I’ve been meaning to say….your blog is ridiculously beautiful. ♥︎
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June 12, 2017 at 3:25 pm
Aww thanks to the moon and back, sweetie pie! 😚✌
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