I wish I could
Bring you back
One last time
To say goodbye.
To kiss your feet
To hug you close
To stop this pain
Within arose.
Save me dad
You’re drowning me
In notions of
insanity!
© chaos–xd • 2018
I wish I could
Bring you back
One last time
To say goodbye.
To kiss your feet
To hug you close
To stop this pain
Within arose.
Save me dad
You’re drowning me
In notions of
insanity!
© chaos–xd • 2018
February 10, 2018 at 7:08 pm
it is good to read you again. I’ve missed you in my reader feed.
I’m not sure where these words of yours are coming from. I see pain and a need for being saved. So, will send a hug!
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February 10, 2018 at 7:18 pm
Much appreappreciated Kris darling! A hug would be great.. love u!
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February 10, 2018 at 7:12 pm
A post from you after so long! How have you been?
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February 10, 2018 at 7:19 pm
Great and not so great.. missed you Riya!
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February 10, 2018 at 7:20 pm
Missed you too!
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February 10, 2018 at 7:38 pm
How are you..where are you all these days..is it about your cat???
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February 10, 2018 at 7:39 pm
Again…it’s too dark about the father..the pain can be clearly seen
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February 10, 2018 at 11:18 pm
Beautiful. So beautiful and powerful at the same time. Great picture choice. It fits the piece you wrote so perfectly.
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February 11, 2018 at 3:50 pm
Reading your post after a long time. Missed your words.
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February 12, 2018 at 12:05 pm
Welcome back, I missed you!
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February 13, 2018 at 12:51 pm
You make even sadness look beautiful! Your words do some kinda magic I guess! 🙂
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February 14, 2018 at 3:52 pm
Hi! Im scared right now and fearing the worst!! Dad?
I felt something was amiss regarding your disappearance but not to this extent! Anxiously waiting!
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February 19, 2018 at 5:23 pm
I’m okay! (:
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February 19, 2018 at 5:31 pm
I got to know about it….and it brought back my memories as well and I could understand…all i can say is time is the best healer! I know it’s not easy but that’s how it’s….stay strong dear!!
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February 18, 2018 at 12:19 pm
Please save me…
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February 19, 2018 at 5:22 pm
Intense
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February 25, 2018 at 11:29 am
I miss him too, with every breath I take and how I would give anything to be able to see him again. Beautiful piece, chaos. I hope you’re okay.
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March 7, 2018 at 11:17 am
Painful poem and beautifully emotions depicted
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March 13, 2018 at 5:20 pm
Been away for long again! Hope are doing ok! Missing you!!
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March 13, 2018 at 5:26 pm
Add me on Facebook?
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March 13, 2018 at 5:54 pm
Oh you replied!! How are you??
No im not on any social media actually….hence checking on you here only…
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April 15, 2018 at 6:23 am
Thought to just check on you again. Been a while. Hope you are holding up ok amidst all the trauma… i know it’s not easy and takes a lot of time for pain to become bearable (because it never heals completely but only lessens)…however we have to keep living as that is the only option…and pray for the departed soul….hope you are being taken care of…and do try to get back to the usual as that will divert mind a little…take care! May you get all the strength to deal with this painful loss.
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March 18, 2018 at 6:03 pm
Beautifully written poem. Feelings can tie you and at times strangle you if not expressed . This poem has a depth of feeling not easy to express with just words, with the addition of your art you where capable. The expression may not relief the pain but it is a very good start toward overcoming it. 💐
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April 14, 2018 at 5:59 pm
My words ……
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!
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April 21, 2018 at 9:00 am
Where art thou? I left, you left?
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June 6, 2018 at 5:33 pm
I come.. once in a bluemoon!
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June 6, 2018 at 5:47 pm
The comment is probably the best thing I saw in my all-blue-day! Even bluemoons are more frequent than you! Where have you been!?!
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June 6, 2018 at 5:51 pm
I moved out of wp! This place no longer feeds my demons! How hav things been at your end ?
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June 6, 2018 at 5:58 pm
Oh, I’ve been pathetic! Really, really horrible! Now that I’ve stopped writing, I now have no outlet whatsoever.. and every second feels like I’m about to burst. Unsure what will come out of me when I do. It has been so bad that I’ve started feeling good about the fact that I’ve to go home for a couple of days..! 😂Loads of fucked up shit which I probably can’t share here .. but I’ve missed your words for sure! I hope things have been better for you..!
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June 9, 2018 at 6:27 am
Couldn’t save it. Can you please send it again?
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June 9, 2018 at 6:34 am
Saved!
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July 16, 2018 at 11:08 pm
Love this, so dark.
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August 17, 2018 at 3:04 am
What a beautiful poem and I was struck by your words and incredible artwork
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December 31, 2018 at 7:15 pm
Happy new year
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December 31, 2018 at 7:17 pm
Wish you the same
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February 5, 2019 at 6:52 pm
Phoenixxxx! It’s been sooo long. I’ve come here after ages, you might not even remember.
But, your pieces still evoke my soul.
Hope you’re doing good. ❤
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March 7, 2019 at 4:22 pm
I remember you! Miss them old days! ♡
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