The slippery steering wheel crumpled in his hands as if it were strands of wool. His headlights like a flaming arrow, pierced the wet darkness. The raging wind pounded with the ferocity of a wild beast. The heavy droplets swirled through the storm, gently blurring everything, as though the city had been painted on a wet canvas, melting down into watery greys and whites.
Through the torrents of water that hammered down on the roof of his car, He cursed the storm that swirled in both, his town and his mind. He forced down his foot pushing the acceleration pedal speeding to the core.
He suddenly leaned forward squinting through the windshield. His headlights framed a little furry lump shivering amidst the freezing storm, in the middle of the road.
Although his instincts were to automatically hit the brake paddle his brain was too weary to think. Letting the slight guilt flush out he lied to his mind that he saw nothing and accelerated faster as his car gave a sudden jerk running over the furry puddle. Pulling over at a deserted parking lot, he sprung out of his car, ignoring the rain like a jet of a hydrant pouring like a waterfall. He ran like a bullet stumbling through the puddles, his head bent against the scorning wind and the hammering rain through the hospital corridors.
His dripping hands pushed open the ICU doors and as he set foot into the wam, silent room the rapid beeping stopped. The ECG of his dying son, now a straight line.
Above the fury of the raging storm and his frantic cries, A painful howl of a dying puppy echoed the frozen streets.
© chaos–xd 2017 •
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- °• Frantic Echos
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- Rocking Chair
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January 19, 2017 at 4:20 pm
Oh no!
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January 20, 2017 at 12:54 am
Inevitable death!
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January 20, 2017 at 12:56 am
Yes.. but it’s so unfortunate that he had to witness his own son’s death. A child passing away before a parent has always been more painful for me because I’ve seen it happen.
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January 20, 2017 at 12:59 am
Then you’ll feel towards this writing from a different angle. What I had in mind while writing it was if he didn’t run over the little puppy maybe he wouldn’t have lost his son!
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January 20, 2017 at 1:02 am
Yes you’re right. Isn’t loss of life itself a sad affair?
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January 20, 2017 at 1:05 am
Of course. Saddest among them all I suppose!
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January 20, 2017 at 1:06 am
Hmm.. You move me to tears at times, gurl. Keep it up. I’m loving your posts 🙂
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January 19, 2017 at 4:23 pm
WoW!!!! i was lost in your words……..almost poetic flow…..picturesque……loved it…absolutely…….seriously… 🙂 🙂
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January 20, 2017 at 12:55 am
Thank you heaps Nov!
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January 20, 2017 at 3:55 am
my pleasure X…… 🙂 🙂
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January 19, 2017 at 4:39 pm
Is this the story of your pet?
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January 19, 2017 at 4:41 pm
My heart wouldn’t be able to bear it if this ever happened. Thankfully, no! My pup died of old age.
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January 19, 2017 at 4:44 pm
Ok.
Nicely written.
The ending is brilliant. It gave me goosebumps.
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January 20, 2017 at 12:56 am
Thanks Dalj!
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January 20, 2017 at 1:14 am
Welcome dear.
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January 19, 2017 at 4:46 pm
Brilliantly written… Very very poetic… Wonderful
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January 20, 2017 at 12:56 am
Thank you Shivee! ❤
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January 20, 2017 at 1:25 am
❤❤❤😇
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January 19, 2017 at 5:28 pm
Amazing QueenD!! I could imagine the whole scenario!!!!
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January 20, 2017 at 12:57 am
Thankyou DeeDee! 😄
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January 20, 2017 at 5:56 pm
You’re always welcome!!!!! 🙂 🙂 ❤
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January 20, 2017 at 12:52 pm
This was too much awesome, Miss Dark Ji!!!
Isn’t it very unfortunate for a father to see his son losing his life in front of his eyes?
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January 20, 2017 at 4:00 pm
He shouldn’t have run over the puppy Ash! Karma got him!
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January 20, 2017 at 4:06 pm
Wanna read the episode 28?
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January 20, 2017 at 6:04 pm
Of course!
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January 20, 2017 at 6:10 pm
Will post it tomorrow for sure!!
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January 20, 2017 at 3:37 pm
Whoaaaa! Great one.
Btw congratulations for the 2nd century🎊🎊
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January 20, 2017 at 3:53 pm
It was a complete surprise!
We need a blog party when you hit 300!
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January 20, 2017 at 3:56 pm
Ahaha yea we do! I’ve a surprise waiting for you, too 🙂 wait for it👻
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January 20, 2017 at 3:58 pm
Wow I’m hyped! 😄
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January 22, 2017 at 3:50 pm
Babe, this is so good. Karma always finds you, no matter where you hide.
I like the fact that your character is as natural as ever, he pushed the guilt at the back of his mind, like all broken humans do, when our mind is clouded with worry for the ones we love.
The poor ball of fur. 😭
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January 23, 2017 at 1:17 am
Wow, not many people got that this was about karma.. I’m hyped that you understand my writings in a different level Haj! You always brighten up my days with your heartfelt comments! ❤
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January 23, 2017 at 6:57 am
Oh. You’ve expressed it so well that your piece explains itself to me. 💕
Keep them coming. 😍
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January 23, 2017 at 12:54 pm
Thankyou Haj! Your comments are like warm hugs on a frozen winter night! ❤
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January 23, 2017 at 1:03 pm
Yayyy. 💕🙈
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January 23, 2017 at 1:02 pm
Yayy. 🙈❤
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May 21, 2017 at 3:07 pm
Can’t imagine happening this to anybody.. the ECG, now a straight line..couldn’t read that line..very well written moon
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May 24, 2017 at 10:13 am
Thank you darling! It was karma that took his son away from him!
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May 24, 2017 at 11:12 am
Karma is too bad for taking his son for a puppy..
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May 24, 2017 at 11:15 am
I’m glad his son was taken! The puppy didn’t deserve to die!
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May 24, 2017 at 11:16 am
I can’t think that way..
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May 24, 2017 at 11:23 am
I’m sorry If I had said anything wrong. It’s just my opinion.
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May 24, 2017 at 11:32 am
Never be sorry about saying what you feel! 😏👌
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May 24, 2017 at 11:34 am
No I’m keeping quiet now..enough said.
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