”This crazy woman wont shut up!! I never have my privacy!! I know when I want to eat and when to study. I’m not a baby anymore! I hate my mum!!!” The teenager whatsapped his bestie.
Years later, a middle aged lonely man with a long lost appetite, rocked on his old rocking chair, listening to the deafening silence as he stared at his mother’s dusty framed photograph, garlanded with dead flowers.
In response to : pain
© chaos–xd 2017 •
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A Glimpse of Darkness 
January 21, 2017 at 1:24 pm
I came, I read, I left!
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January 21, 2017 at 1:32 pm
Thanks for coming!✌
Thanks for reading! 👍
Thanks for leaving! 😄
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January 21, 2017 at 1:33 pm
😀
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January 21, 2017 at 1:27 pm
Awesome..true
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January 21, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Thank you! 👍
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January 21, 2017 at 1:34 pm
deep !
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January 21, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Thanks bunny! ✌
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January 21, 2017 at 2:07 pm
wow, you know me :p
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January 21, 2017 at 1:36 pm
Omg I felt it!
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January 21, 2017 at 1:57 pm
Lol, I bet you did!
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January 21, 2017 at 2:03 pm
Now that u mentioned it of course I did!😁
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January 21, 2017 at 1:49 pm
Kids don’t understand parents and parents don’t understand kids. And “in maximum cases”, they don’t even want to understand eachother. I agree that our parents have experience but the thing is, we don’t have the same problems.
In my own case, I used to tell my Mom before going anywhere but when I ask her “May I go on a trip with my friends?” she always say no. So, now I do tell my Mom where I’m going except for the trips.
Now about your post……
It felt deep inside…made me a bit emotional.
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January 21, 2017 at 1:55 pm
I guess the biggest problem is, there was less of a generation gap between our parents and their parents! (Our grandparents) so, we are judged on the same level our parents were judged by their parents! Of that makes sense..
Thank you for the comment Dalj! It’s definitely the lack of the need to understand each other that causes all this mess that is is often realized and regretted when it’s too late!
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January 21, 2017 at 2:02 pm
That’s the biggest problem of the entire world, first we don’t understand and think that WE ARE RIGHT, and we take too much of time in realising what’s right and then we regret on our wrong decisions.
We should always listen to the other person then think on what he said and after that take any decision.
You are a teacher, so please suggest something on this🙈.
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January 21, 2017 at 1:58 pm
A deep meaning as usual, woven in a beautiful garland!!
😊
As always, amazing Miss Dark Ji!
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January 21, 2017 at 2:04 pm
Thank you my sugar pudding! 😊
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January 21, 2017 at 2:03 pm
Oh 😦
Amazing post. Loved it. *tears*
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January 21, 2017 at 2:49 pm
My writings always make you sad, I’m feeling bad to say thank you! 🙈
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January 21, 2017 at 3:42 pm
No no you should feel good about it. I love your writing!!
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January 22, 2017 at 9:21 am
Honoured! Thank you ❤
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January 21, 2017 at 3:19 pm
Amazing thought… well written! 🙂
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January 21, 2017 at 3:32 pm
Thank you heaps Ani! ✌
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January 21, 2017 at 3:43 pm
This is so heart touching! You have made me speechless!!
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January 21, 2017 at 3:52 pm
A little nudge to us all who often get too worked up at the little annoying things our parents do!
Thank you loads Dee! ❤
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January 21, 2017 at 4:10 pm
❤❤❤❤
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January 21, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Ahh deep!
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January 21, 2017 at 5:20 pm
😊👍 thnx Hun!
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January 21, 2017 at 4:29 pm
This is lovely and feel for sure 🙂
And I love the blog title and the truth
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January 21, 2017 at 5:13 pm
And I love this very first comment of yours! Thanks Charvi! 😊
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January 21, 2017 at 5:42 pm
For every mysterious part of the dark tale and the biggest mystery of your identity, I feel you truly deserve this award so I nominated you. :p
https://thehonestfabler.wordpress.com/2017/01/21/mystery-blogger-award/
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January 22, 2017 at 5:04 am
My surprise! Thankyou Ash! I’ve been nominated a few times but this nomination excited me greatly!
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January 22, 2017 at 9:00 am
Haha that’s great! You’re most welcome❤🤘
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January 21, 2017 at 9:40 pm
A sad part of life. Thanks for the reminder to appreciate my mum, even when I disagree with her!
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January 22, 2017 at 5:06 am
Pleasures all mine hun! ✌
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January 22, 2017 at 6:41 am
Nice post..
I feel its the age that is at fault..At adoloscence we tend to have privacy n ol..And when we become mature then only we understand the true relations of our lives..
But sometimes that maturation is too late..
Nicely crafted👍🏻
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January 22, 2017 at 9:18 am
Absolutely! Thank you for your feedback and the time Anji! Much appreciated! xoxo ✌
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January 22, 2017 at 3:55 pm
As heart wrenching as ever, Phoenix.
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January 23, 2017 at 1:15 am
wow! my writings are incomplete without your presence, Haj, thanks a ton hun!
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January 23, 2017 at 6:55 am
That’s a huge thing you just said. 🙈
I’m glad I am a part of this. 😁
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January 23, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Let me take all the pleasure of having u as a part of this! xoxo ❤
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January 23, 2017 at 10:35 am
Brilliant. Really enjoying this blog
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January 23, 2017 at 12:53 pm
Thank you jen! 😄👍
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January 24, 2017 at 6:36 am
Powerful
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January 25, 2017 at 3:13 pm
Thank you! ✌
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January 24, 2017 at 6:12 pm
A sad but truthful story xx
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January 24, 2017 at 6:24 pm
Thank you for taking the time to comment! ♡
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January 24, 2017 at 8:29 pm
heew! This has a deep message!
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January 25, 2017 at 1:54 pm
Thank you. A silent reminder for everyone and my own self!
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January 26, 2017 at 6:14 pm
Aww.just loved the way you took the story from privacy to lonely.
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January 27, 2017 at 5:40 pm
Thankyou Jen! Happy to come online on a rough day and see all your comments! ♡
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January 27, 2017 at 5:51 pm
Rough day?😢 don’t worry.tomo will be a awesome day for you.night is a perfect time to forget the unpleasant moments and hope for a better day.good night
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January 27, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Goodnight sunshine!
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January 27, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Goodnight moon
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January 27, 2017 at 10:38 am
i guess, his wishes came true………
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January 27, 2017 at 5:39 pm
And it’s always too late!
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December 31, 2018 at 6:03 pm
Wish you a very Happy New Year Miss Dark Ji! I wish this new years brings with it so much of joy and beautiful memories that you never run out of smiles. Thank you for I could know you… 😊
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December 31, 2018 at 6:07 pm
Omg! ♡ what a pleasant surprise! Miss the good old days!!
Happy New Year darling!!!!
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