Aunty Yohani handed me a box. The cardboard was punched and it reminded me of the cheese from Tom and Jerry! Why’d she pack my gift in such a cheesy looking box? I pulled off the Ribbons and looked into the box! “Open it, open it” Damn, this woman is more impatient than I am! I looked into the box, curiosity slaying me into shreads and I caught my breath as two sparkly eyes looked back at me.
Oh no! Not another piece of shit..
It jumped out of the box and licked my face! Ewww.. that slimy ass crap is now all over me. It’s tail rotated and wiggled like a dying worm! “Tippy has a friend” I heard someone squeak!
No way in hell! The world’s most ugliest puppy was now mine! “Congratulations Riley the sucker-piece-of-shit-puppy owner man” I gave my self an imaginary standing ovation!
My dad tried to sound as cheeerful as possible, not knowing how badly he sucked at it.“Your mom and I were hoping that you and Cyn would like to spend some no-study-all-play time. We’ve planned a two day trip to Venice and aunty Yohani has volunteered to spend the days with you!”
“We’re gonna have so much funnnnn” aunty fatass Yohani gave the most rapid fake clap and a terrible happy squeal.
Good lord save me!
My mind didn’t know what to feel. A trip to Venice? I had the whole house to myself? I had to babysit my sister? And PLAY WITH HER?! We don’t usually play together but something about today seemed to tingle my playful vibes. Mom and dad were finally going away.
It felt great to even let the thought of authority sink in. To finally feed my hungry soul that was Avid for happiness. Happiness of my own kind. So I’m gonna have power over this evil sister, who I had lost all my happiness to. The day she was born was the day i was cursed. Her birth had set fire to my ribbon of happines, which sucked away all the love and attention that was once all mine. I could teach her a lesson! Yes!
Mom let out a sigh of relief seeing the smile on my face. My eyes fixed in a longing stare at her smile wondering how long it would last..
To be continued..
© chaos–xd 2017 • Avid
April 23, 2017 at 2:47 pm
Wow I just can’t Imagin what he would do… so much evil thoughts!…
“Oh no! Not another piece of shit.. ” I laughed really hard at this line😂
Rileys character is coming out more and more now… can’t wait to read the next! Awesome chaos!✌
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April 24, 2017 at 10:46 am
Rileys character was brought out more on request! I’m happy this is helping you with your study breaks. Ending the series today! Have fun!
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April 24, 2017 at 11:08 am
So sad to here that😣 I’m sure it’s gna be unexpected!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:05 pm
“Congratulations Riley the sucker-piece-of-shit-puppy owner man” 😂😂😂😂😂😂 Sorry, can’t control my laughter😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Again sorry, I can’t help it!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:48 am
Hahahahaha I didn’t laugh when I wrote it but this comment got me cracking up really bad! 😂
Thanks love!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:32 pm
Hehehe…you’re welcome😉
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April 23, 2017 at 3:15 pm
I find this “give no fuck” tone the narration is coated in so refreshing..its not downright bitching, which would have turned this into a weepfeast ..instead the deadpan humor in the overall atmosphere keeps ur nose glued to the screen..like I’ve mentioned before, many can relate to the shit ( I won’t say mundane) this dude is apparently forced to chew thru in order to keep things on an even keel.
If u were to write a journal, if u were into that shit at all, if u could create prose as beautiful, this would have been the outcome.. to reject the pseudo joy in conventional means of happiness that brings bitterness to ones tongue..I am truly enjoying the confessional tone the entire thing carry..
Think I’ve asked u to read the catcher in the rye..this piece reminds me of that great book to no end..
We are fucking ugly inside sometimes babes but if given the chance we can put it to beautiful words and you have done it thru this piece.
I wish this wasn’t coming to an end this soon and you kept exploring this theme..pls consider.
I’m constantly blown to pieces by ur sheer creativity
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April 24, 2017 at 11:09 am
Bro, I swear to God if WordPress was like Facebook your comments would get way more likes than the original post itself!
You can become a professional review dude and you’d just be so famous for how amazing you are!
I feel so blessed and I’m not just saying this to make up a reply! Haha.. honestly though.. you make me feel amazing bro!
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April 24, 2017 at 4:36 pm
I wish I was a professional review bro, bro 🙂 cos only gods and you know how I hate my job..but I believe the fact that we love one another has played a major role in finding my amateur reviews so wonderful..
..and I’m so proud that creator of these wonderful pieces is you!
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May 1, 2017 at 8:08 am
Hey, I agree with you here, this basically summed up everything for your post.
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May 1, 2017 at 8:37 am
his comments are always breathtaking!
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May 1, 2017 at 8:52 am
Seems so.
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April 23, 2017 at 3:15 pm
😂😂😂 All his curiosity got down the gutter with her surprise… But I am curious to know what he’ll do now feeling like the man of the house…
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April 24, 2017 at 10:49 am
Thank you for keeping up with the series hunbun! I’m happy not many people have figured out the ending!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:22 pm
Lol, loved it☺😊😊😊
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April 24, 2017 at 10:50 am
I’m so very glad u did! xoxo 😙✌
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April 23, 2017 at 3:24 pm
Oh my! I love this series!! Perfect mix of emotions!! I am looking forward to reading more!!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:50 am
U never cease to amaze me! Thanks for all the support! Much love! 😙✌
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April 24, 2017 at 12:49 pm
😁
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April 23, 2017 at 3:41 pm
I am a little afraid for his sister. Fun read!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:52 am
Always the little sibling gets picked on! Thank you for the follow up!
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April 23, 2017 at 3:57 pm
This is one dark sibling story. But I’m loving it!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:55 am
I’m overwhelmed! 😙✌
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April 24, 2017 at 11:19 am
😊😊😊
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April 23, 2017 at 4:08 pm
I feel he is going to strangulate someone with the ribbons … Hahahaha… Let’s see what lies ahead..
I had been waiting for a series since long.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:56 am
Hahaha wow! That would be a perfect ending.. I’m excited that Mr. Books is hooked up with the series! Thanks for the support bro! 😏✌
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April 23, 2017 at 4:27 pm
“Congratulations Riley the sucker-piece-of-shit-puppy owner man” 😂😂😂😂😂
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April 24, 2017 at 10:57 am
Hahaha…seeing this on quote it made me crack up too! 😂👌
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April 23, 2017 at 4:40 pm
Reblogged this on Brainy Versatility.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:57 am
Thanks Brainy! 😏✌
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April 23, 2017 at 4:43 pm
The suspense is killing me!
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April 24, 2017 at 10:58 am
Will relieve you today bruh.. just a couple of hours till I figure out how to end this! 😭🙈
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April 23, 2017 at 5:04 pm
His emotions have been described so well.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:58 am
Something I’ve always been terrible at! Describing my emotions! 😭👌
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April 24, 2017 at 12:32 pm
You certainly did a good job!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:37 pm
Thanks heaps yuhu! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 12:45 pm
My pleasure!
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April 23, 2017 at 5:50 pm
Oh Riley! The feeling is mutual.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:59 am
Don’t tell me u hate dogs! 😭
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April 28, 2017 at 9:57 pm
I definitely do. 😁
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April 24, 2017 at 1:45 am
Good day! I would just like to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the “One Lovely Blogger Award.” 😊
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April 24, 2017 at 10:59 am
Thanks Julie hun! Much love + xoxo 😙✌
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April 24, 2017 at 4:18 am
Hey there….I just wanted to let know that I’ve nominated you for the “One lovely blogger award”❤
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April 24, 2017 at 11:00 am
Will check it out right away! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 12:08 pm
😊💛
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April 24, 2017 at 5:50 am
This is so much fun. Waiting for the climax. 🙂
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April 24, 2017 at 11:00 am
In a few hours until I figure it out honey! Thanks for saying in touch with the series! 😏✌
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April 24, 2017 at 11:08 am
It’s worth staying in touch with sweetheart. ❤
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April 24, 2017 at 12:37 pm
Beautiful!!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:38 pm
Thanks hun! 😙
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April 24, 2017 at 12:40 pm
You’re welcome!
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April 24, 2017 at 12:58 pm
Oh!!!!!!! Riley is finally going to unleash his dark side! Can’t wait to see how your words will describe this!
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April 24, 2017 at 1:16 pm
Gonna give it my best shot!
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April 24, 2017 at 4:05 pm
Riley is a BOY!!!????? What!?? (I kept reading the previous episodes with a mind that Riley was a girl! Time to shift to another planet!)
Coming to the episode, what were you thinking while planning this story! It’s so amazing and believable at the same time. Though I feel scared for the last epsiode after reading your tags as “gore” “revenge” I hope the younger sister is fine. She better be fine. 😂😂😂
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April 29, 2017 at 2:16 pm
From the moment I started writing it.. all I thought was the ending! I know people were gonna hate me but I just had to do it 😀
Looks like my tags have given away the suspense!
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April 29, 2017 at 2:17 pm
Haha, your tags are always predictable, but it works great for you. No problem, your stories still amazes us!!
Do you know I have started a series?
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April 29, 2017 at 2:30 pm
I’m Not reading it until you promise you won’t leave us hanging 😭
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April 29, 2017 at 2:39 pm
I promise!!!
P.S. I like to break promises…
Just kiddin, read it when you like. I promise I will end it here only!!! And will end it soon. And also, I don’t have that much big plot to take it too long…
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April 29, 2017 at 3:48 pm
Sounds perfect ! 😏✌
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April 25, 2017 at 5:48 am
Omg I can’t believe that a little boy is much frustrated than a working person 😂😂😂
Have written nicely !
#Andhera_kayam_rhega
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April 25, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Hahaha. We all are more messed up that Riley for sure! 😄👌
andhere hamesha keliye! 🙈
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April 26, 2017 at 2:00 am
Dr.jackal
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April 26, 2017 at 6:35 am
Good lord save me. Riley should not hurt the little girl,Cynarah can’t take it. But it’s YOU writing this series. your strength is you make the readers fall for the negative characters too. Don’t know how you do it. But it’s just we can’t ignore your characters. We just connect to them easily.
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April 28, 2017 at 5:09 pm
i love your comment JenJen! it just makes me go entirely blank in excitement, i love how all of you predicted the ending but still was like “no. not Cynarah!!!” 😀 sorry to have broken your soft little heart
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April 28, 2017 at 5:16 pm
You’re welcome moon. No probs dear. YOU can break it ‘N’ number of times. This was your best. Hatred, jealously, love, cuteness, naughtiness..everything was there. It was a magical read moon.
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April 29, 2017 at 1:46 pm
Thank you so much sunshine!
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