In the depths of the ocean,
In the heart of the night,
In the core of the storm
And the unreachable height,
To step towards the dusk,
That holds the cursed spell,
To embrace the darkness,
I crept into hell!
© chaos–xd 2017 •
Other poems
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- Insomniac•°
- You!
- Venom •°
- Death •°
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- Burn
- Heartless
- Silent Darkness
- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Eternity •°
- Forever•°
- Chaos
- Drowning•°
- Evanescent
- Masks of Death °•
- °•Rubbish
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
- No more
February 20, 2017 at 2:19 pm
You write so wonderfully
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February 23, 2017 at 6:14 pm
Simply-me .. you simply made my day!
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February 25, 2017 at 11:28 am
Aaww my pleasure to have done so, I’ve said it before and I say it again, that you do write wonderfully, capturing the moments so impeccably.
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February 25, 2017 at 11:40 am
I’m honoured!
😌✌❤
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February 25, 2017 at 11:42 am
I’m glad to hear.
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February 25, 2017 at 12:15 pm
👍
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February 20, 2017 at 2:21 pm
Gosh, this was, well I have no word! Darkly Enchanting!😍
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February 24, 2017 at 3:11 am
“Darkly enchanting” damn..love that phrase! Thanks gurl..
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February 24, 2017 at 12:52 pm
Haha..you’re welcome! 😀
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February 20, 2017 at 3:50 pm
Once again skillfully and beautifully written. Love this. Dark and enchanting. 😍
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February 24, 2017 at 3:12 am
Second time someone mentioned this phrase and I’m overwhelmed! xoxo ❤
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February 20, 2017 at 4:12 pm
Speechless😆
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February 24, 2017 at 3:12 am
Thank you thank you! 😄 *bow*
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February 24, 2017 at 5:38 am
It’s my pleasure😀😂😂😀
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February 20, 2017 at 4:39 pm
Wow! The way you embrace darkness is so amazing I get the feeling “take me to hell too! “
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February 24, 2017 at 3:13 am
Haha.. reminds me of the movie “drag me to hell” 😄 thanks Vaas! ❤
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February 24, 2017 at 8:35 am
Hehe 😁
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February 20, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Aha! It rhymes! That was wonderful!
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February 24, 2017 at 3:14 am
A little rhyme makes it all a bit more sparkly! 😄
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February 20, 2017 at 5:21 pm
Wow…. I loved that! So deep and so good to read!
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February 20, 2017 at 6:15 pm
Thanks buddy! Glad you liked it
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February 20, 2017 at 6:16 pm
🙂
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February 20, 2017 at 7:23 pm
Hugs 😘…no nid to creep into hell..
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February 22, 2017 at 2:35 pm
*hugs hugs*
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February 20, 2017 at 9:40 pm
Take care. Enjoy the day x
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February 24, 2017 at 3:14 am
Hope you’re having a great one too!
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February 24, 2017 at 3:32 am
All good. The cat has announced herself. Better hit the trail again soon. Hope all good where you are. New moon this weekend. Enjoy
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February 21, 2017 at 12:30 am
That picture paired with your words wow very powerful stuff. You know how to bring it!
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February 22, 2017 at 2:35 pm
Much appreciated! This comment made my day Cherylene..
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February 21, 2017 at 2:16 pm
I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. Check it out. https://www.livingvsexisting.com/mystery-blogger-award
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February 24, 2017 at 3:16 am
The comments on your blog seems to be disabled to me!
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February 24, 2017 at 10:31 pm
I am sorry to hear that. I would have to review the comments settings to make sure everything is ok. Thanks for pointing that out. Appreciated.
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February 25, 2017 at 1:51 am
I hope you find your way through enabling them!
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February 21, 2017 at 4:22 pm
The rhyme scheme made it soooooo damn impactful! It felt as if “Joker” is saying it. Amazed👌
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February 22, 2017 at 2:30 pm
Coming from you, this made my day!
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February 22, 2017 at 2:34 pm
Yayy I’m glad you’re happy :*)
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February 22, 2017 at 10:25 am
Nice piece,
Keep it up! 🙂
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February 22, 2017 at 2:28 pm
Thanks Ali! ✌
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February 23, 2017 at 3:21 am
When the receding sun cast long shadows,
And the creeping dusk cloaks
Green meadows,
Her warm embrace folds me in,
Lights a candle deep within,
Blue flees in haste as black begins,
She agrees with all my sins..
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February 24, 2017 at 3:34 am
I’ve read this over a hundred times and I keep falling in love with it after every read! You are unbelievable with words!
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February 24, 2017 at 4:21 am
You inspire me to write 🙂
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February 24, 2017 at 7:19 am
“To embrace the darkness,
I crept into hell!”
Wow. I loved this line so freaking much.
Keep going, Phoenix.
Xoxo
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February 27, 2017 at 12:10 pm
Your comment gave me goosebumps! Lol thanks hun! ✌
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March 5, 2017 at 6:28 pm
Aww, anytime. 😉
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February 24, 2017 at 1:14 pm
A story told through poem and done in so few words. I’m happy you are hear to share your talent with us!
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February 24, 2017 at 1:16 pm
Much love Anthony! Thank you so much for the support! ✌
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February 27, 2017 at 1:23 pm
We don’t want you in hell, babe. Yo have to stay here in the light with us 🙂 🙂
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February 27, 2017 at 1:28 pm
The light is poison for me! 😭
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February 27, 2017 at 1:40 pm
My Girl, you sure you aren’t a vampire? I live vampires Btw 😉
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February 27, 2017 at 1:51 pm
I wish I could be one after my vampire diaries addiction! 🙈
A daylight ring would definitely help though!
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February 27, 2017 at 2:07 pm
Vampire Diaries? Nah! That’s tame. You’d be right up there in my esteemed vampires list along with True Blood’s Eric Northman and Anne Rice’s Lestat
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March 3, 2017 at 7:05 pm
Personally a soft corner for darkness. U opened the door for it to feel some breeze pass by. Goosebumps.
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March 4, 2017 at 1:07 am
Finding people with a sprinkle of love for darkness is bonus for me! Thank you for the comments hun!
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March 4, 2017 at 1:46 am
Thank for the posts then!
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March 4, 2017 at 10:49 am
Pleasures all mine!😏✌
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April 1, 2017 at 8:45 am
No alphabets on my keyboard can weave that word to describe the awesomeness of this one!!! This is so damn good! That last two lines just took my breath away! And seriously, reading your poetry feels like, so good (more than a pizza) and after such a long time!!!
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April 1, 2017 at 2:28 pm
Wow that leaves me honored for an eternity and beyond! Much love Harsh! It’s so awesome to have these comments from u again! I’ve missed you greatly! xoxo ✌
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April 1, 2017 at 2:30 pm
I’ve missed you greatly, too!!
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April 8, 2017 at 2:46 am
i got to say, you have a cool blog my friend!
but don’t crept into hell please …
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April 8, 2017 at 8:52 am
Haha thanks heaps imam! 👍😄
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April 11, 2017 at 11:11 am
You crept in hell…?? OK..but don’t forget to post your hell experienced in blog😝..very well written
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April 11, 2017 at 11:12 am
I have a whole heaven and hell descriptive series .. you may find the posts of you go through my blog..
I’ll link you to them if you’re interested! 🙈
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April 11, 2017 at 11:13 am
I will see them..
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