My long lost bird,
Empty cage,
Is your vicious soul
Still burning in rage?
If you only knew,
This life: a trial,
Would you hurt me less
Than die in exile?
Now you stand,
Your record flawed,
What will you say,
When you face your God?
Alas to Dust,
When we return,
While some rejoice,
Should I watch you burn?
A blessing or a curse,
To love so deep.
Tell me what’s worse,
Before I sleep.
My sweetest love
Define my curse,
To drown beneath the waves
Or die from the thirst.
© chaos–xd 2017 •
Other poems
- Insanity •°
- Goodbye•°
- Insomniac•°
- You!
- Venom •°
- Death •°
- Caged
- Burn
- Heartless
- Silent Darkness
- °• The Circus
- Hurricane •°
- Flames
- Eternity •°
- Forever•°
- Chaos
- Embraced
- Evanescent
- Masks of Death °•
- °•Rubbish
- Beautiful Sin
- Poisoned
- Red Birds
- No more
February 24, 2017 at 7:52 am
Beautiful. Strikes something with me right now.
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 8:00 am
We are all cursed in our own unique ways! ❤✌
Much appreciated Coyote!
*beep beep*
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 8:01 am
Like the Uranus transit of Aries currently…
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 8:10 am
Painfully poetic!
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 8:40 am
Thank you sugar plum! ❤✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 8:43 am
You’re welcome 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 8:37 am
Difficult to define the curse….
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 8:39 am
It’s always a little bit of both I guess!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 9:55 am
Loved it..
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 12:38 pm
xoxo ❤✌ your appreciation excites me in so many different levels! 😄
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 5:19 pm
I think you are my favorite poet ever 🙂 😘 I always find myself checking ur blog to see if you have posted anything new ..
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 2:23 pm
Thank you darling! Wouldn’t be blogging if it wasn’t for you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 10:16 am
I always get a good feeling when reading your poems!
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 12:38 pm
That’s an honour! ✌❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 12:41 pm
🙂😉💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 10:35 am
Dark and deep as usual! 🙂
Always looking forward to you visiting my blogs!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 11:20 am
If only all your posts were on the same blog!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:05 pm
Wow! Ok!
LikeLike
February 24, 2017 at 1:07 pm
I must say, you can follow which ever you like.
LikeLike
February 24, 2017 at 1:08 pm
I’ve followed them both! ✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:11 pm
Anyways, I was talking about my poetry blog ‘Words of Aqua’, basically. I put a new piece almost every day.
It’s always good to know another poet’s remarks, that’s all!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:14 pm
Oh Ali! U know I’m a fan of your poems and try hard to keep up with them all! What I meant was.. u use this blog of yours to comment on my stuff and it’s hard to find your actual blog through the comments.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:19 pm
Well both of my blogs contain links to the other.
If only you seek, you’ll find.
And I don’t want to force you whatsoever,
cause I’ll keep on reading your work no matter you read mine or not. Cool? 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:23 pm
Cool! And of course I’ll read yours. The app page is much easier to access through the comments than the link which takes me to the actual blog! I don’t know if that made sense.. but I’ll definitely find my way! Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:32 pm
No thank you,
for being patient with me! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 11:28 am
Yet again brilliant hope you ok.
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 12:39 pm
Well not too bad, thanks! All good with you?
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 12:42 pm
Yea all good thank you my little boys birthday 1 today lol glad your ok.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 11:49 am
Its such beautiful things that always inspire me to write 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 25, 2017 at 9:39 am
That’s great! Thank you! 😏✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 12:39 pm
That’s great! Thank you
LikeLike
February 24, 2017 at 1:20 pm
The choice , the irony , the truth
Everything in one flow 🙂
It’s beautiful
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 1:28 pm
And somewhere in that flow.. I drowned! 😏 lol
Thank you Charvi!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 1:33 pm
Haha ! The drowning has a purpose !!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 2:13 pm
It’s a beautiful poem.
I don’t know what was there in “Should I watch you burn?” that made me read it again and again and again and again and…… I love that line, but I don’t know why🙈. I just do…
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 2:45 pm
Haha.. thank you Dalj! I love your unique feedback on my posts .. its not like a typical comment where people just say something for the sake of saying it! You always have something special to say.. that brightens up my days!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 2:49 pm
I love being unique 🙈😂…
And I really don’t like some typical comments like nice post, awesome post and blah blah… DUDE, you just hit that like icon, that’s enough to show that my post was nice.
I always try to write something different. #unique🙈😂
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 3:01 pm
That’s painful.. It’s a beautiful poem.. I hope you are fine. I read it twice. Loved it. It was too deep!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 3:15 pm
This comment got me all excited! 😊 Much love Mehul. I’m fine thank-you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 3:45 pm
You deserve to be awesome. No one should be there who should have right to steal our happiness.. Our happiness should be above everything..
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 3:52 pm
Haha true that.. Distanced myself from him and i kill him in my stories! 🙈
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Hehe. That’s good for you😊 kill him in real too😜
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 3:56 pm
😄 giggled at this comment! I wish I had the heart to do that! Would be great to poses a heart that poisoned tho!
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 4:29 pm
You don’t have the heart to kill in real, I don’t even have the heart to kill in my dreams also…
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 4:13 pm
This was awesome! It makes you feel so many different emotions and was actually very refreshing! Great stuff as always!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 4:32 pm
Thank you for the genuine support throughout my posts dom! you’re amazing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 6:51 pm
Aw why thank you! My pleasure!
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 4:50 pm
Beautiful ☺ Loved it.
LikeLiked by 2 people
February 24, 2017 at 4:53 pm
Much appreciated! ✌😌
LikeLike
February 24, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Define my curse,
To drown beneath the waves.
Or die from the thirst.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Speechless.
LikeLiked by 3 people
February 24, 2017 at 4:58 pm
I love that verse too! ❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 5:24 pm
It’s just so wonderful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 8:05 pm
Exactly what I wanted to say.
LikeLiked by 3 people
February 24, 2017 at 6:33 pm
I’m speechless!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 6:40 pm
and I’m honored! 😏✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 6:59 pm
Woah! Now that made me feel honoured!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 24, 2017 at 7:09 pm
This resonates so deeply with me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 27, 2017 at 12:10 pm
It’s time you find your way out!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 7:11 am
Strikingly Beautiful!!❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 9:39 am
Honoured! 💟✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 9:40 am
Trust me The Pleasure was all mine…😃😃❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 9:47 am
and of course, mine too! 😏
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 10:03 am
I know that already… 😏😂
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 7:18 am
“The life: A trial”I loved it!💙 I think it is a blessing if we are loved equally in return. :’) I really loved it! Just stumbled upon your blog. Can’t wait to read more! 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 9:42 am
Hello there! I see you’re a new blogger and having such genuine feedback from you is heartwarming! Thank you heaps, sunshine! 😏✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 10:20 am
Hello 🙂 Yep I’m a newbie here. Hope you’re doing good. Your welcome.😄
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 2:24 pm
I’m great and hope you are too! Sorry I’m taking this long to reply.. I had missed this comment! Much love! Xoxo ✌
LikeLike
February 25, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Beautiful💚
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 25, 2017 at 2:31 pm
Thank you sugar plum! 😌
LikeLiked by 1 person
March 1, 2017 at 7:42 am
Hey moon!A blessing or a curse,to love your writings. A blessing ,to love and a curse,to love so deep. I dropped my new phone in water a week before. I don’t know when I’ll be back but I will.take care
LikeLiked by 1 person
March 3, 2017 at 11:01 am
You’ve touched the warmest corner of my shadowy heart! 😄 Thanks love! I hope you get your phone fixed! 👌
LikeLike
March 26, 2017 at 1:49 pm
Finally someone with some real poetic talent! (No offense every other person who puts poetry on their blog). I put up one poem, (same name) and I think that making your poem have a rhyme scheme and be meaningful is a LOT more difficult that free verse. You have talent.
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 2:25 pm
Wow! Flattered much babe! You completely made my day! Thank you to the moon and back! 😘✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 6:58 pm
Just real talk! But you’re welcome. (It’s rare to find real poetic talent bc no one gives critical feedback so everyone thinks their poetry is awesome…they have that right since it is a creative process, but your writing blows me away).
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 7:24 pm
I do find it hard to be critical sometimes but I try my best! Once again your comments brought so much joy! I feel awesome..haha 😘✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 2, 2017 at 10:48 pm
Good! You should be proud!
LikeLike
April 1, 2017 at 8:55 am
Write a poetry book!!!!!!
Know what Di? I usually find poems sailing over my head, but your poems are different. They fill me with some kind of satisfaction, and a flood of emotions run in my mind. This one is amazing! (Almost everything you write is amazing)
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 2:26 pm
Thank you heaps and tons Harsh Ji! Your motivation.. appreciation and all the cuddly panda comments definitely added up to my blogging journey! 😘✌
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 1, 2017 at 2:30 pm
I am super glad I could bring a smile on your face! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 7:55 am
Your poems will be the death of me. 😭💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 8:25 am
Omg 😄😭 as heartbreaking as that sounds ..let me take it as a complement! 😘👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 8:29 am
Haha, I’d die to tell you how dear they are to me!
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 3:28 pm
Damn I’ve missed how my heart leaps at your comments! Thanks honey pudding! 😙
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 4:41 pm
Aww! Anything for you, sweety. 😘❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 7:56 am
“A blessing or a curse,
To love so deep.
Tell me what’s worse,
Before I sleep.”
LOVE THIS!
LikeLiked by 1 person
April 9, 2017 at 3:41 pm
Thankyou Babe!! 😙✌
Ive missed this feeling your comments give me!
LikeLiked by 1 person
May 4, 2017 at 10:25 am
Inspiring poem! If you are interested in the art of tea check out my blog 🙂 https://infuzed.net/2017/05/03/essential-guide-for-tea-brewing/
LikeLike
January 21, 2018 at 10:04 pm
Thank you, I’ve recently been looking for info about this subject for a long time and yours is the best I’ve found out till now. However, what concerning the conclusion? Are you positive concerning the supply?
LikeLike
January 21, 2018 at 11:59 pm
I’m no longer positive where you’re getting your info, but good topic. I must spend a while finding out much more or understanding more. Thanks for magnificent information I used to be on the lookout for this information for my mission.
LikeLike